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Chapter 13- If Mr. Darcy Dared

My answer is still no. You may not marry in three weeks’ time with your sister, Jane, and your friend, Mr. Bingley,” Mr. Bennet said.

“No? But that is unfair!” Elizabeth Bennet looked furtively at her betrothed, Mr. Darcy, then to her uncooperative father. Her face flushed to a shade similar to a ripened tomato. “It is utterly unfair!” she repeated, in a perfect older version of her sister Lydia.

Lizzy proved to her father that all of his daughters were more than capable of the famous Bennet pout. He used a finger to massage the inside of his ringing ear as the pout came coupled with the equally renowned, Gardiner shrill.

“Perhaps we ought to–” Mr. Darcy began, halting when Elizabeth turned her ire on him. Her eyes slanted in anger in his direction were more than enough to keep him willing to hold back. Discretion, is, as they say, the better part of valor, and she was performing excellently as their champion.

Mr. Bennet watched the nonverbal exchange between the two young people in his study with great interest, but it still did not change his mind. “Just this morning you could not tell me without a doubt that you wished to marry this man.”

Elizabeth’s cheeks remained red as she now blushed and looked down at her feet. Then she recalled the feeling of Mr. Darcy’s hand snaking up the middle of her back, and his lips igniting hers on fire with just a mere touch, and her fierce defiance returned in spades. She was interrupted from beginning another attack on her father’s logic when a knock sounded on his study door.

Ah, Phillips, glad you could make it.” Mr. Bennet smiled, welcoming his brother-in-law, the solicitor, to the discussion. He introduced the man to Mr. Darcy, and the same extended his hand in greeting.

Why is Uncle Philips here?” Elizabeth asked, hope swelling in her chest this had all been an elaborate ruse on the part of her father.

I sent him a message this morning, rather anticipating I might see the two of you this afternoon. I do so enjoy when I can plan the intrusions to my reading time,” Mr. Bennet said, sarcastically.

Mr. Phillips opened his leather portfolio to slide out numerous papers. “This here is for Mr. Bingley and Jane,” he explained as he handed one stack of parchment to her father. “And these are what I managed to draft for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth. Without knowing all of the particulars, I left some blanks for us to fill in.”

Elizabeth closed her eyes and realized everything to do with her and Mr. Darcy had become topsy-turvy. Their public display of affection should necessitate that she married first, or at the very least, simultaneously with Jane. However, officially, Jane had become formally engaged first, so the right to select her date correctly rested in the eldest sister. But now the discussion of Elizabeth’s marriage settlement was about to begin. This was a conversation where she did not wish to be a party, thus allowing at least one part of her journey to the altar to remain conventional.

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Chapter 13 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)

I should see to Mama. She is no doubt looking for me,” Elizabeth started as her father and Uncle Phillips were quietly discussing the papers.

Without looking up, her father spoke. “You will not take flight, now, Lizzy. Have a seat; there is the matter of explaining how your position so radically changed in the passing of mere hours.”

“That was before I knew the truth of two important matters. One issue you are aware of,” Elizabeth pointed at her index finger to enumerate, “and the second I had yet to bring to your attention.” She finished hastily and looked out the window as she swallowed. Her Uncle Phillips’ carriage was being driven around the drive towards the back, signaling the man planned to stay for dinner. Elizabeth wondered briefly if her aunt had come with him, but the paper-thin walls answered that query as soon as she heard the familiar cackling of two sisters sharing good news: her mother and her Aunt Phillips.

Feeling exposed to the ridicule of her family from all sides, Elizabeth wished she could turn around and grasp Fitzwilliam’s hand. The interview with her father had not gone as she had planned. First, Mr. Bennet had greatly enjoyed tormenting her suitor for being so late for his call. And when neither Elizabeth nor Mr. Darcy could give him a compelling reason for his tardiness, Mr. Bennet saw no reason to relent.

“And what are these issues that you mention? Please apprise me of the one that I already know and acquaint me with the mysterious obstacle at your leisure.” Mr. Bennet pointed to the chair next to his desk that Elizabeth so commonly sat in when she was working with her father on the sums for the estate or translating a particularly tricky passage of Greek or Latin.

Feeling at home in her father’s study, Elizabeth marched forward and flounced into the chair, only realizing, after she had taken a seat, the unfortunate setting of the room. Now she sat seemingly at her father’s right hand, with Uncle Phillips flanking his left side, while poor Mr. Darcy stood under interrogation! As Elizabeth realized her error, she leaned forward as if to leave the chair, but her father’s hand stilled her movements. Her heart pained at the sight of poor Mr. Darcy standing awkwardly to answer for all of this.

“Lizzy?” Mr. Bennet asked.

Suddenly feeling the part of her mother’s daughter, unexplained nervousness attacked Elizabeth’s senses, and she stammered to get the words out. She knew she must speak the truth to her father, but her heart did not wish to say a single mean word against Mr. Darcy. So she took a deep breath and closed her eyes.

“The first issue is that of Mr. Wickham, the man you and Uncle Phillips teased me about in the carriage on our way to Netherfield—”

Mr. Bennet leaned back in his chair and scoffed. “We hardly teased you. Do not place blame on others for your intrigues, my dear.”

Elizabeth’s eyes flew open, and her head swiveled sharply in the direction of her father. How could she not have seen it before? All the times she had joined him in being quick to make sport of another and here she was not set apart from any of them. This was her future life, and her father acted as though it were an opportunity to find folly.

“Though you charged me with interrogating Mr. Darcy while we danced, I’m afraid that I rather haphazardly inquired if he was engaged to his cousin. He misunderstood, believing that I was saying I was soon to be engaged to my cousin, which we all know led to the evening’s public display.” Elizabeth frowned, but her eyebrows lifted to offer a silent apology to Mr. Darcy. He sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose.

“And Mr. Darcy was correct, though I did not know that my mother had made arrangements with Mr. Collins behind even your back, Father.” Elizabeth felt a slight exhilaration to throw a barb at her father’s weaknesses. After all, she had learned at his knee the best ways to poke holes in someone’s peacockish ways.

“And so the mysterious issue is that of the cousin? And what say you, Mr. Darcy? Are you promised to this cousin of yours in Kent?” Mr. Bennet slipped into a halfhearted role of a concerned parent.

“No, sir.”

Elizabeth bit the corner of her lower lip as she did not wish to discuss more about Mr. Wickham. But her father was too clever for such a distraction. Feeling a bit of exasperation himself, Mr. Bennet tersely instructed Elizabeth to continue.

“Yes, the matter of Mr. Wickham. You see he told me a very pretty story of how Mr. Darcy had denied him his inheritance. Under closer inspection, I realize Mr. Wickham’s story does not hold veracity by our short acquaintance. I believe it uncommonly poor taste for someone to speak ill about an acquaintance on such a first meeting. Would you not agree, Papa?” Elizabeth still attempted to distract her father with no gain.

“And what have you to say for this, Mr. Darcy? You are not promised to this cousin in Kent, but how do you explain that this man has gone to homes in this neighborhood to accuse you of the aforementioned crime?” Mr. Bennet threaded his fingers into a clasp upon his desk drumming his thumbs back and forth as he waited for Mr. Darcy’s reply.

“On that accusation, I stand responsible. When you are the landowner of a great estate, it is your duty to make decisions for the best welfare of all who count upon you for their livelihood. George Wickham is not fit to run a church, and I saw no reason to burden my dying father with what I knew. There is a side to Mr. Wickham that my father never saw, and I would not be the son to break his heart,” Mr. Darcy stated.

Elizabeth sat straighter in her chair as her hope increased she would not have to reveal what Mr. Darcy had told her about Mr. Wickham being fast with young ladies. Her father might be very cavalier in his discipline, but even for him, there were boundaries he expected his daughters not to cross.

“It seems to be a harsh sentence for the careless mistakes of a young man. I believe none of us were fit for the church when we were young lads in school,” Mr. Bennet countered.

Mr. Darcy shook his head. “There is more that I am not free to share. For Mr. Wickham is not a man with any scruples where it comes to young women.”

And do you have any proof of these misdeeds?” Uncle Phillips asked.

Mr. Darcy blanched. “None that I am willing to provide. The terms of my father’s will were clear, and I operated in consultation with my solicitor. I can provide you evidence that he was given a lump sum of the value of the living, the remains of such funds I am unable to account.”

Uncle Phillips and Mr. Bennet exchanged a look, and Elizabeth began to feel concerned.

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Chapter 13 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)

Why would Mr. Darcy need to provide proof? Even when Mr. Wickham told me his lies, and I suggested he seek remedy from the law, he told me the provision was of an informal nature,” Elizabeth defended Mr. Darcy until she was out of breath.

It was her uncle that responded. “There is no cause for worry about Mr. Darcy; we merely wished to make sure the mettle of the man you are marrying, Elizabeth, is honorable and true.”

Elizabeth watched carefully as her uncle’s right hand fingered his signet ring. She had played cards enough times at her aunt’s home to know when her uncle was bluffing.

Perhaps you should go see to your mother and your aunt. They would be ecstatic to fawn over your good news,” Mr. Bennet choked out.

But Elizabeth crossed her arms in front of her chest and sat back in the chair. “Not unless you agree to an earlier wedding date for me and Mr. Darcy, Papa.”

The three men all shared looks of utter disbelief that Elizabeth, the lone female in the room, spoke so brazenly.

Are you certain such a strong-willed wife is your choice, sir?” Mr. Bennet joked, getting a laugh from his brother-in-law. But Elizabeth didn’t laugh, and neither did Mr. Darcy.

So long as she is on my side, I am the fortunate man,” Mr. Darcy said.

And if she is not?” Uncle Phillips asked, to expose the converse logic of Mr. Darcy’s statement, as he slid a sheet of paper presumably for Jane and Bingley for Mr. Bennet to sign.

Then I shall have the even greater privilege of hearing her wisdom, or convince her of my own,” Mr. Darcy could not help but slightly smirk as Elizabeth’s cheeks again flushed red, and she looked away. Still, she remained in the chair.

Mr. Bennet gathered the sheets of parchment he had signed for Jane so that Phillips could reassemble them. The stack affecting Elizabeth now faced him, and the man sighed.

Turning to address his daughter, he reached out a hand to touch her arm, a touch that brought Elizabeth to look directly into his eyes and see the pride of a father who had watched her first breaths and her first steps.

I cannot in good conscience allow you to wed like Jane because Mr. Darcy’s sphere is unlike Mr. Bingley’s. In Jane’s match, she is the superior partner elevating the rank of a tradesman’s son.” Mr. Bennet paused to see if Mr. Darcy would interject to argue, but he did not. This increased Mr. Bennet’s resolve. And he took a deep breath as his daughter waited.

I’m afraid the world of your suitor is a world I denied you and your sisters, though it was your right to enter it long ago. The ballrooms of London and tearooms of peers might as well be the jungles of Borneo for as much as you have experienced them.”

But Papa—”

No, Lizzy, if I’ve done nothing right by you thus far, I shall do this. I wish for you to enter those rooms on the arm of Mr. Darcy. See the dangers and delights that await. And if at the end of April you still wish to marry, I will come to any church in London myself to walk you down the aisle.” Mr. Bennet’s eyes glistened with tears as Elizabeth freely cried, unprepared for the monumental shifts in emotions this getting married business evoked.

Do you disagree, Mr. Darcy?” Uncle Phillips asked, hesitantly, as Mr. Bennet and Elizabeth shared a brief, and uncomfortable embrace.

Clearing his throat, Fitzwilliam Darcy waited until Elizabeth drew back and looked to him for guidance. It was the only hesitation he might have felt, potentially losing Elizabeth’s favor if her father instead wished to use the time to dissuade her. But when she looked at him for his opinion on the matter, Darcy stood a nudge taller, gazing at the woman of his heart’s desire with eyes that betrayed his happiness.

No, I do not. I would never wish for Elizabeth to regret our union, and I feel that my family would also like a role to play in our nuptials.” When Elizabeth smiled at him, the young man could not help responding with a bashful grin on his own. Then, schooling his emotions to remember where he was, he turned his head to address Mr. Bennet directly. “Miss Elizabeth has related that you despise Town, and yet you would not be adverse to my family’s parish in London?”

Mr. Bennet wiped his face with his handkerchief to remove all remnants of sentiment. “My brother here can be to blame for that, as he rightly pointed out that we do not have sufficient space to host your relations. I suspect Lady Catherine de Bourgh would not find the Meryton Inn suitable.”

At this, all in the room laughed, and Elizabeth took the opportunity to stand and take a position next to Fitzwilliam. Reaching down, she grasped his hand, which brought an awkward amount of coughing into the room.

I believe now I really should take my leave and see to my Mama. You have important matters to discuss.” She gently pressed his hand to lend him courage, and this time her father did not command her to remain. Of course, Elizabeth didn’t even look at him or Uncle Phillips, only Mr. Darcy, when she nodded and left the room.

Dumbstruck, Mr. Darcy stood there, trying with great difficulty to steady his breath as the lady had bewitched him, body and soul, with just her merest acknowledgment.

Mr. Bennet pulled out glasses and the decanter from his cupboard.

Come on, son; I believe it’s time for a drink.”

Mr. Darcy happily accepted the invitation and took the seat previously occupied by Elizabeth so that he could help fill in terms of the marriage contract.

You’ve been reading . . . If Mr. Darcy Dared, a work in progress by Elizabeth Ann West.

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If Mr. Darcy Dared

a Pride and Prejudice variation novel

Direct Preorder Release Date: March 23, 2018
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As Charles Bingley and Fitzwilliam Darcy prepare for the Netherfield Ball, a gentlemen’s challenge develops between them to secure their future happiness  . . . with the two eldest Bennet sisters! But when things do not go as expected for Mr. Darcy, Hertfordshire society is in an uproar over the pursuit of one of their favorite daughters by such a wealthy gentleman. 

Despite being claimed by Mr. Darcy as his future bride, Elizabeth Bennet has no plans to wed the proud and disdainful Mr. Darcy, no matter what her father says! At her sister’s urging, she agrees to give him a chance, if only for Jane’s sake. But there are others with an interest in breaking a match between Fitzwilliam Darcy and some country miss. . .

The stakes are high and romance strong as two of Jane Austen’s most beloved characters dare to declare their feelings, dare to defy family, and dare to trust each other!

If Mr. Darcy Dared is a steamy romance for fans of Elizabeth Ann West’s other works, especially those readers who love their drama cranked to a ten! 

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3 Responses

  1. Oh my they have to wait until April!!! I can see the logic, but I think she’d be better off being introduced as Mrs Darcy as opposed to his fiancée. “They” wouldn’t dare harm her as his Mrs, but could potentially as his betrothed in order to stop the wedding.c

  2. What a relief for the couple that the date of April is settled. Elizabeth’s fight to support Darcy and win the day only increases his admiration for the wonderful supportive wife he is gaining

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