As I reread this chapter, I laughed at myself and how much I am such a fangirl of Downton Abbey. I still rewatch all of the seasons every year. 🙂 

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Chapter 8 - A Winter Wonder, a Pride and Prejudice Variation

With a temporary truce called between Lady Matlock and her mother, Elizabeth Darcy sought out her housekeeper, Mrs. Reynolds. Knowing the housekeeper’s routines, Elizabeth made for the kitchens.

“Yes, and after my father passed, my cousin made us do all sorts of tasks around the house. I learned to cook and clean and while I cannot confess to missing the cleaning, I do find I miss the stress relief of rolling dough!” Elizabeth Darcy pounded the dough with another good punch, scaring the poor two kitchen maids for a moment. Breaking into a broad grin, the grand lady of the house tucked an errant strand of hair back off her face leaving a streak of flour on her forehead. The youngest maid, Sarah, began to giggle as the older maid Enid elbowed her strongly in the ribs. “It’s quite all right, I know I must look afright!”

Cheerily, Elizabeth tossed the dough and kneaded it until she heard the unmistakable gasp of Mrs. Reynolds behind her, the minxish mistress of Pemberley turned around and invited her to join the table. “I find kneading bread does wonders for one’s stresses over particular relations.”

“Mrs. Darcy! That is, I do not believe Mr. Darcy . . .” Mrs. Reynolds stopped as Elizabeth raised an eyebrow. The housekeeper nearly criticized the very woman who controlled her fate and it was a few moments before she could regain her tact. It had been many years since Mrs. Reynolds needed to contend with a mistress of the house. “I find that Mr. Darcy prefers soda bread, but hand me a bowl.”

The two maids’ eyes widened as the strict and stern Mrs. Reynolds rolled up her sleeves and joined them in preparing the breads for dinner.

“Sarah, Enid, do the two of you know how to read or do sums?” Mrs. Darcy asked politely, hoping her warm tone and camaraderie in tasks would permit a truthful interview.

“No ma’am, me ma sent me into service when I was but six. Too many brothers and sisters, you see.” Sarah happily made conversation with Mrs. Darcy, not fully grasping how rare it truly was for a woman of her exalted status to even address the lower house staff by name.

“And Enid?”

Enid looked carefully to Mrs. Reynolds before she responded. Although she was nearly eighteen, Enid had no desire to remain in the kitchens her whole life and wanted nothing more than to study to be a ladies’ maid. But no one knew of her desires and she planned to keep it that way.

Receiving a barely perceptible nod from Mrs. Reynolds, Enid merely shook her head and returned her focus back to the cutouts she needed for the third course.

Mrs. Darcy noticed the discomfort and worked a few moments more on her portion of the meal before depositing the dough, perfectly rounded, back into the bowl. “I believe that is ready to proof. Mrs. Reynolds, would you care to meet with me in your office?”

“I would be delighted. Enid, please send fresh water to my wash basin for Mrs. Darcy.” Obediently the girl curtsied briefly and turned to fetch water from the kettles on the far fires.

Elizabeth Darcy and Mrs. Reynolds sidestepped the bustling foot traffic of the numerous servants and kitchen staff. Elizabeth made a concerted effort to compliment the Cook as she oversaw the kitchen boy turning the spit before following Mrs. Reynolds to her office deeper in the servants’ area.

The young footman Thomas peeled out from around the corner just as the two women in charge of the household disappeared. A nephew to Mrs. Molly Borthwick, the Cook of Pemberley for the last twenty years, young Thomas was a touch too blasé about his position in the household and how easily a footman could be replaced.

“Mrs. Reynolds’ got her hand full with that one. Helping in the kitchens, soon she’ll be criticizing ye meals, Aunt Molly.”

“Hush with you! I told you to stick to your duties. And a mistress that values the work of her staff be worth ten of the other sort that wrinkle their noses when they cross that threshold.” The Cook pointed to the wooden stairway that led between the two floors, one of gentility, the other one of sweat and work.

Thomas maneuvered around his aunt to spy Sarah at the work table, taking over the pastry cut outs since Enid was still about her task.

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Chapter 8 (cont'd) - A Winter Wonder, a Pride and Prejudice Variation

“What you think, Sarah? She asked us footmen if we was wanting lessons! Did she ask you the same?”

“And if she did, Thomas Borthwick, I wouldn’t be telling the mistress’ business to the likes of you. Mrs. Darcy don’t need to be talked about, and some of us have work to do.”

Thomas reached over to pull a raspberry from the bushel for the tartlets and popped it into his mouth to the scowl of the kitchenmaid.

“Mrs. Borthwick, he be nipping food again.” Sarah dutifully tattled, her smile captivating Thomas’ attentions so he did not notice when his aunt came right behind him to yank him by the ear.

“YEOW! Let off! Let off!” Thomas cried as his aunt dragged him to the stairs.

“Go clean the wax drippings in the dining room. Or see to the leather trunks conditioning. Find employment or I’ll sic Mr. Colston on you.”

Thomas shrugged off his aunt’s grip as she released him and hurried up the stairs. With a sigh, Molly Borthwick bustled over to the work table to inspect Sarah’s work, clucking her tongue in tacit approval.

“I did right by keeping Mrs. Darcy’s words to myself?” The young maid only recently came of notice as she reached her fourteenth year and no longer had to scrub the pots. Permission to perform real food preparation was as good as a promotion for Sarah.

“Of course you did, and if you don’t get to finishing those forms the dough will be too warm to handle.” Molly Borthwick reached over and grabbed a raspberry herself before giving a wink to Sarah and turning around. Observing the meat spit still moving at an uneven rate, she placed her hands on her hips. “Turn that beast correctly or I’ll make sure you spend the evening practicing, Daniel McGurk!”

Mrs. Reynolds offered her employer tea as Enid dutifully delivered a tray once Mrs. Darcy had cleaned the last evidence of her bread making adventures from her person. The two women politely considered one another as they sipped, Mrs. Reynolds patiently waiting for Mrs. Darcy to begin the conversation as was her due. She pretended not to notice the wife of her employer’s hands shake as they replaced the teacup to the edge of the housekeeper’s desk.

“I’m sorry if my presence in the kitchen is disruptive. I know discipline is a vital component to running a house this large and if you feel I have undermined you in some way, that was not my intention.”

“I think your presence today made you a few deep loyalties, though . . .” Mrs. Reynolds paused. The tenant party had been a smashing success and there had not been any discord between her and Mrs. Darcy, but an air about the mistress still gave the most senior woman of the staff anxiety. “I would not say a regular appearance would be good. Mrs. Borthwick is so careful about her kitchen.”

“Certainly, we all must play our roles to the fullest extent.” Elizabeth Darcy nodded and absently rubbed her hands on the babe readjusting himself. Her hands felt a slight nudge through her dress and a playful little smile filled her lips. If only Fitzwilliam were here!

“Has he moved?”

Elizabeth nodded.

“But I thought you were feeling the babe’s movements for weeks!” Mrs. Reynolds’ eyebrows knit in a straight line of worry that made Elizabeth laugh out loud.

“I have, but I think his foot or arm just nudged my hand! Fitzwilliam has been so eager to feel the baby, and now I think I have the perfect Christmas present!”

The two women shared a moment of silence in the one thread that connected them: Fitzwilliam.

“Have you heard any from your sister in Scotland? Mrs. Buchanan has sent me very kind sentiments about her help with Starvet House.”

The question of Jane was one Elizabeth rarely escaped. Even her husband had taken to asking for her to read the eldest Bennet daughter’s letters aloud when she was comfortable for any sign of distress. Secretly, Elizabeth had noticed a change in description of Mr. Hamilton and an increase in his mentions, but she kept such intelligence to herself. It was entirely too much to speculate so many hundreds of miles away. And the prattle between housekeepers would not force Lizzie to disclose a sisterly discretion.

“Jane is very happy in Scotland and I think Mrs. Buchanan has made a great effort to make her feel at home. Fitzwilliam has told me again and again he has the most loyal staff and I must say the evidence is more than been shown to me.”

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Chapter 8 (cont'd) - A Winter Wonder, a Pride and Prejudice Variation

Mrs. Reynolds scoffed and demurred at such a compliment, looking for anything on her desk of interest to change the subject from such a personal one. Instead, Mrs. Darcy pressed on.

“And this is precisely why I am coming to you to help me nettle out how to give each member of the Pemberley staff one hour of instruction in writing, reading, or arithmetic.”

The folds of skin that defined Mrs. Reynolds’ jawline sagged as she dropped her smile. “A school? For staff?”

Elizabeth nodded. “Yes, the display at the tenant party startled my senses. In Hertfordshire, many of the staff were taught by my father when they were younger, and though I was not able to teach much myself towards the end  . . .” Elizabeth refused to think of the days where she disappointed her father in no longer finding an eagerness to teach her younger sisters, nor the staff, “The convenience of such education proved a boon.”

“Forgive my impertinence, but what convenience? Teaching the staff skills beyond their station is strictly prohibited in this household and has been what’s been proper for longer than my tenure.” Mrs. Reynolds shook her head as if truly spooked by the very idea. “No, no, for the staff to take lessons from the Mistress herself? It bodes on the edge of inappropriate.”

Despite the blowback from Mrs. Reynolds, Mrs. Darcy remained undeterred. “The convenience comes in the staff operating at a higher base level. No longer will only the Cook be able to read the bill of sale from town when goods are delivered, but all of the kitchen staff. Not only will the butler be able to read the wine selections, but the footmen. And they can help keep an accurate accounting of all around them.”

“Am I to understand you fear graft and cheating to be going on at Pemberley?”

Elizabeth sighed. This was not the explanation she meant to give. “Not remotely am I making such an accusation. I am merely suggesting that it be time the responsibility be shared amongst all of the staff that should they see something amiss, they have the proper education to report it to yourself or Mr. Colston. And also Mrs. Borthwick if the matter deals with the kitchens.”

“I see. You mean to train our replacements.” Elizabeth began to protest but Mrs. Reynolds held up her hands in mock surrender. “No, no, ’tis a wise plan. We are none of us on this Earth forever.”

“Mrs. Reynolds, I have already replaced one housekeeper at a property and have no desire to repeat the occurrence in the near future. If I thought you lacking in any form, I would ask you to retire and find a replacement. The aim of these lessons has nothing to do with anyone’s work quality and about demanding our younger staff rise to the challenge of a future that faces us all. Times are changing. I shall not have another Christmas gathering with my sister writing out names of children as gifts, they shall all have the gift of literacy before next year’s party.”

“Do you mean to invite the tenant children as well?”

“Not at this time, no. I wish to start with the servants, the maids, the footmen, the stable boys. I only need a suitable location to hold such classes.”

“There’s always the schoolroom on the third floor . . .” Mrs. Reynolds offered.

Elizabeth Darcy shook her head slowly, biting her lower lip. “I’m afraid that location might prove to be too disruptive for the main household. Besides, it would not do for the stable boys to carry their muck through three flights of stairs.” Elizabeth wrinkled her nose, receiving a slightly warmer posture from Mrs. Reynolds. Gazing around the office, she realized the room was truly quite large for the servants’ area. Yes, along the back wall a table and a few chairs might provide the perfect space for group lessons.

Mrs. Reynolds watched as her mistress sized up her office as her eyes roamed about. A dark feeling of dread gripped Mrs. Reynolds’ gut and she struggled to force out her next question. “You’re not suggesting I teach them. In here? In my office?”

“Hmm, you teach the lessons, no, no, the aim is to give you less burdens, not more. No, my sisters Kitty and Mary will do nicely for tutors, perhaps offering two days per week so that staff may rotate. If we placed a table in that corner there, that would be the most unobtrusive.” Mrs. Darcy pointed to the far corner by the fireplace.

“But—but this is my office! Where am I to work when lessons are going on?”

“Why you would take your rounds, meet with me in my sitting room so we can plan the menus, or take a walk. I’ve observed your schedule most carefully and there are numerous times a day when you are gone from your office for more than one hour at a time.”

“It appears I have no say in this matter.”

Elizabeth tilted her head slightly to one side and considered the defeated housekeeper for a moment. While true that she absolutely held the final say as wife to Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth had no desire to be a tyrant in her own household. Reaching forward she grasped the elder woman’s hands as they sat folded in a prim manner, again startling the woman’s staunchly held traditions. “I only ask you keep an open mind. This is a trial run to see how everyone gets on. And your feedback will be one I am most keen on, if you don’t see the staff improving in maturity and responsibility, then we will reassess.”

All Mrs. Reynolds could hear was the fact she would share her office for six months to give maids and footmen lessons in grammar! But she dutifully farewelled Mrs. Darcy as she rose to take her leave. After collapsing in her chair at the shock of such a scheme, Edith Reynolds opened a seldom unlocked cabinet and poured herself a glass of spirits. Hastily, her office door opened once more and Mrs. Darcy’s bright, glowing face emerged from the crevice.

“Feel free to send a letter of warning to Mrs. Buchanan. I sent a letter today advising Miss Bennet of my wishes for the Scotland house and she will carry out the lessons there!” Elizabeth spied the drink in Mrs. Reynolds hands and pursed her lips to keep from laughing at the poor woman.

Without another word, Elizabeth nodded and vacated Mrs. Reynolds’ office for the final time. As she walked down the hall back towards the upper levels of the home, she noticed more staff than ever made a point to bow or curtsy in deference. Yes, in time she would win over the staff. She just had to!

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a winter wonder

Confronting her first trials at Pemberley, Elizabeth takes on the tenant Christmas party, sidestepping her mother’s meddling, and finding a way to support the needs of all of her family members. But finding time alone with her husband, Mr. Darcy, in a house full of people is a challenge, even at an estate as large as Pemberley! As old secrets bear fruit, Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth stand united and find support in each other. With a babe on the way, and surprise visitors, there may just be more than one winter wonder to behold.

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