Guess what? The first draft of this book is DONE! Yes..27 chapters. I am posting this weekend and would LOVE feedback. Just to be full disclosure: I do use AI to write but I tell it what has to happen each chapter, I edit the words line by line, and I use it as a tool like I did dictation. It allows me to write without pain. This past week, I wrote 24,000 in 9 hours across 5 days.
There is a lot of misinformation about what AI is and isn’t… it’s a dictionary slot machine. If you’d like to see HOW I write with AI to get the rough draft on the page, you can see this week’s writing: https://www.youtube.com/live/cqzEb_BdYRU?si=E3Jx1lMGYFN7CFwo
The first day I was working on The Gentleman is Mine, but abandoned it because I was not feeling it. Day 2 I was like “I am finishing Book 6…” and I DID!!! I cannot believe it! I am working on final edits this weekend and then it goes to April Floyd… What a ride.
Oh, and don’t be mad… but there will be a Book 7 to handle the London part of the story… and if you want me to keep going with the other girls getting married (Kitty, Mary, Lydia)… let me know 🙂 We can keep going. This is for US.
Love to you all and yes, I did build a FREE tool for any author or aspiring author to work with AI for FREE (raptorwrite.com).
Chapter 11 - The Heart of Marriage, Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage, a Pride & Prejudice Variation
A line of carriages filled the drive up to Pemberley in the most impressive display of hospitality the grand estate had performed in over a decade. The weather blew cold, but not enough for snow, denying the renewal of the Yuletide Ball of any festive support. Horses stomped and snorted, their breath pluming and their muscles sturdy and thick as columns. The beasts were impatient to carry their carriage’s wheels over the gravel and pavement of the drive and then be led away to the stables. The passengers inside peered out the windows to see how much longer until their carriage’s turn.
The Gardiners were the first to arrive, having rested for the night at the inn at Kympton, and rushing to make their way to the couple they had championed the most: Mr. and Mrs. Darcy. Their carriage was not unloaded at the front door, but driven around to the back where teams of footmen and coachmen waited for each vehicle to unload it of its luggage and deliver the trunks to the appointed suites. Pemberley buzzed with more activity than even Mrs. Reynolds could remember.
“The children could not believe we are to stay here, Lizzie! They call it your castle!” Mrs. Gardiner gushed, as she and her family were greeted in the downstairs parlor. A roaring fire in the grate battled winter’s chill as the constant opening of the front door to allow more guests to enter lowered the temperature of the ground floor.
“Is that right? Now do you believe all of those stories I told you?” Elizabeth said, bending low to speak to her cousins directly. They merely smiled and shook their heads, their eyes as wide as saucers to stand in the palatial room with art painted across the ceiling.
Realizing she was holding up the receiving line a bit, Mrs. Gardiner fussed over her husband speaking to Mr. Darcy, and then collected her family to follow Mrs. Reynolds to the stairs to learn their room assignments for their stay. Elizabeth put the Gardiners near Kitty’s studio so they would be the most comfortable and away from her mother. In a perverse decision, it was the same wing she was placing the Duke of Devonshire and the Earl and Countess of Derby. While some might feel she was courting trouble by placing peers next to her relations in trade, for Elizabeth, the decision rested solely on keeping anyone of importance away from the antics of Mother Bennet.
Of course, Mrs. Darcy could not stop her mother from entering the parlor just as both the Duke and the Earl and his wife were arriving.
“Uncle Gardiner is here, Mama,” Elizabeth said, with a smile as the formal announcement was made and she stood dutifully by her husband.
“How nice! London is so far away, I wondered if they would make it safely at all. But they have, and now will be at a ball they would never have a chance to attend in Town, that is for certain,” Mrs. Bennet said, keeping her eyes fixed on the doors.
The Duke of Devonshire, William Cavendish, arrived in the finest of silks and a brocade vest, with a coat that was impeccably tailored for him. He grinned as Mr. and Mrs. Darcy immediately bowed, and strolled forward to greet Mr. Darcy.
“Mr. Darcy, it is a pleasure to see you again,” he said heartily, shaking Mr. Darcy’s hand with vigor. “And this must be your lovely wife. I have heard so much about you, Mrs. Darcy.”
Elizabeth smiled and curtsied deeply in response to his compliment as her husband looked on proudly. “Thank you for coming all this way, Your Grace,” she said warmly.
“Oh, it was no trouble at all!” the Duke responded easily. He thanked Darcy about his advice on the planting that spring, bragging about how he had managed it with his steward. For the span of a few minutes, Elizabeth listened with great interest as the Duke recounted the most fascinating details of numerous plants. Unfortunately, as the man spoke, behind him formed another line of guests eager to greet their hosts and refresh themselves in their suites.
Lady Matlock left her conversation with her son and daughter-in-law to greet the Duke.
“Your Grace, I am so glad you have come. It simply would have made your late mother unhappy for you to spend the season alone. Come, may I interest you in a walk to the Conservatory? There is a new species of orchid you simply must give me your opinion on.”
The poor young William Cavendish grinned sheepishly as he allowed Lady Matlock to guide him away.
“You were friends with my mother?” he asked, and then followed up with another question about the orchid.
Elizabeth held back a laugh as Aunt Maggie handled the situation smoothly, until her mother attempted to follow them. Without thinking too far ahead, she reached out and latched onto her mother’s arm and whispered in her ear.
“Please don’t leave me, I need your help with the Earl of Derby,” she pleaded, quietly.
“But the Duke—” Mrs. Bennet protested, and Mr. Darcy expertly introduced his mother-in-law to Thomas Stanley, the Earl of Derby.
Upon hearing her favorite name from the lips of her richest son-in-law, Mother Bennet, she grew flustered and revealed her mind was still very much on the Duke. “Your Grace,” she said, curtseying, to the bewildered smiles of those around her.
“Your Lordship,” Mrs. Darcy quickly followed, trying to salvage the situation.
The Earl of Derby remained frowning. But his wife eagerly pushed her way forward to make Elizabeth’s acquaintance.
“My son was unable to attend, but it was so thoughtful for you to include him,” she said, slightly misty-eyed.
Elizabeth nodded, and asked if the distance had been onerous.
“Of course not, this was once all of my family’s land,” the Earl of Derby said, his lip curling in a slight expression of disgust as he looked around the room.
Ever her father’s daughter, Elizabeth Darcy found his lordship to be utterly comical. So she played into his foibles.
“How fortunate for my family then, sir, that your family was generous enough to sell the land for this home to be built. I am happy to finally meet our neighbors,” she said, her hand instinctively moving to her midsection as her body began to protest the long hours of preparation and now standing to greet each guest.
Lord Derby gazed down at Mrs. Darcy’s midsection and his wife nudged him along. Before they were out of earshot, Elizabeth heard the Countess scold her husband for being so rude to an expecting woman and watched as his shoulders hunched in response.
Suddenly, she felt the press of a hand against her lower back, and Elizabeth looked up to see the very concerned face of her husband.
“Dearest, you’re grimacing. Are you certain you are well?” he asked, quietly, as the Curzons were next to arrive.
“Another half hour, and then I will retire. Your aunt will return by then,” she said, as her mother drifted away to talk to others in the room.
For the Love of a Bennet
What if Elizabeth Bennet traveled with Lydia to Brighton?
A reimagining of Jane Austen’s most beloved tale, Pride & Prejudice, join author Elizabeth Ann West as she writes the romantic adventure story she always wanted! When Lizzy and Lydia arrive in Brighton, it’s very clear that the younger Bennet sister came with very serious plans towards Mr. Wickham. Thankfully, an old ally is also in town, with problems of his own to solve. After Mr. Darcy, himself, is summoned to Brighton to hopefully solve two dilemmas with one wealthy member of the gentry, the whole militia is thrown into an uproar by Wickham’s most dastardly deed, yet. Together, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy have to save Lydia from her own undoing, or it will mean more than just mere reputations are ruined.
For the Love of a Bennet is a novel length story, currently being posted chapter by chapter on Elizabeth’s author site. This story was originally conceptualized in 2019 as a part of the All Go to Brighton challenge.
Chapter 11 - The Heart of Marriage, Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage, a Pride & Prejudice Variation
Outside, the procession of carriages became interrupted by a lone rider on a horse. It was young Master Grant, the eldest son of one of the tenant farmers. A man in his early twenties, he sidestepped the stuffy footmen that tried to block his way and marched into the entryway. The commotion outside the windows attracted the notice of Kitty and Lydia who had been watching the procession with eagle-eyes, and soon rippled through the parlor.
Josiah Grant held his hat in his hands as he entered the room asking for Mr. Darcy and a doctor in a tone of great urgency. Both men pushed their way toward the uninvited guest, though Dr. Matthews hobbled with a cane due to his injured foot. Mr. Darcy reached the lad first, and suggested they withdraw to his study.
“There is not time, sir. A man’s broke his leg. A Derby man,” Josiah warned. “Pa said for me to hurry to the big house fast as I could ride.”
Mrs. Reynolds immediately ushered Mr. Grant out of the parlor and back into the entryway as Darcy and Dr. Matthews nodded to each other. Dr. Matthews reassured Mr. Grant they would take fresh horses to Baslow Dale.
Mr. Darcy turned to find his wife, but discovered her stubbornly directly behind him, as others in the room spoke in hushed tones.
“I must go to the Grants,” he began to explain, and Elizabeth nodded, but then he remembered her distress. “But you need to rest,” he said, and Elizabeth reminded him of others in the room by raising her eyebrows.
“Go! All of this is finery and frippery. As soon as your aunt returns, I will retire to my rooms and allow your aunt and uncle to greet our guests,” she said, looking over her shoulder and feeling immense relief as Lady Brahmington had the Curzons laughing about some anecdote.
Stiffly, Mr. Darcy bowed his head, not wishing to embarrass his wife in front of strangers by offering affection, and he left the parlor to ready for a wild ride of a few miles to that cursed piece of land: Baslow Dale. If the Good Lord had any sympathy for his patience, He would reroute the River Derwent to draw the boundary straight down the middle!
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Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage Series.
The final book of the Moralities of Marriage Series sees Mr. and Mrs. Darcy fighting off scandal and family strife once and for all. Mr. Darcy is summoned to London to provide answers for Mr. Wickham’s crimes. Too many of High Society were hoodwinked by the mining scheme, and outside forces would relish plundering the Darcy coffers to compensate for their losses.
At Pemberley, Elizabeth is set on establishing herself as Mistress of the House, no matter what her mother believes. As the house goes into mourning for Mr. Darcy’s aunt, her sisters are despondent that the yuletide ball is cancelled. Especially when none of them knew the woman! The Bingleys try to distract the younger sisters by enlisting their aid in finding a home of their own.
The old scores of his parents’ generation keep Darcy in London longer than he planned. Not even his cousin is immune to the costs of past treacheries. Despite the machinations of Marlborough and Derby, Fitzwilliam is desperate to get home and see the birth of his first child.
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