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Chapter 10 - By Consequence of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
A familiar face greeted Elizabeth as her eyes adjusted to the low light of the room. The comfortable bed she found herself in proved unfamiliar and she realized darkness had fallen outside.
“Jane?” Her voice croaked as she wondered how long she had been asleep and more importantly, where might she be?
Jane Bennet stirred in the chair next to the bed and shook the last remnants of sleep from her body as she rose to hasten to her sister. “You’re not dead! Oh, Lizzie, you scared us all!” Jane tackled her younger sister in joy as she hugged her fiercely. The sudden movement flooded pain throughout Elizabeth’s senses.
“Ow, ow, pray do not smother me!” Elizabeth uttered in jest, but her joke fell flat as she was unable to mask the intense pain both in her head and lower leg. Sucking in a breath, she tried to ask Jane what had happened.
“You don’t remember?”
Elizabeth closed her eyes and tried, yet nothing came to her. The last thing she could remember was getting ready for the assembly. “No, are we not going to the assembly tonight?” Elizabeth glanced around again and couldn’t place the room. Lucas Lodge? No. Aunt Phillips home in town? Absolutely not!
Jane frowned. “The assembly was two nights ago,” she said softly.
Two nights? Elizabeth had lost two days and the burning in her throat reinforced her sister’s accounting of time. Parched, she motioned for a glass of water from the sideboard. Jane fumbled as she hastened to fetch the drink and hand it to Lizzie.
“Slow down, you’ve been quite ill.” Jane reassured her sister by stroking her hair.
Finished, Elizabeth handed the glass to Jane who gave Elizabeth another bottle, one she instantly recognized.
“No! If I don’t remember, I am determined to avoid laudanum!” Elizabeth tried to push Jane’s hand away, but her meager strength left her body.
“I know, that’s why I put a few drops in your water.” Jane tried to smile as Elizabeth fought against slipping back into unconsciousness. She hated lying to her sister, but knowing Elizabeth as a patient, subterfuge was the only way. The doctor was most explicit if she should wake up, keeping her calm and inducing her to sleep again before she tried to move her broken ankle was paramount.
Jane leaned over Lizzie and gave her a small kiss on the forehead as her eyelids fluttered one last time. Exhausted herself, Jane collapsed back into her chair and pulled the blanket she had been using around her. Before the stroke of midnight, both Bennet sisters slumbered.
The morning sun woke Elizabeth a second time, only this time she found herself alone. She tried to move, but excruciating pain in her leg gave her pause. She was laying flat on her back, her right foot elevated upon two pillows. Sighing, she reasoned she must have hurt her foot on one of her walks and perhaps this grand place was Netherfield.
Just working out that much gave her an intense headache, though the pain seemed to come on far quicker than usual. Her eyes struggled to focus and she blinked a few times, feeling an intense sense of dizziness. Covering her face with her hands, Elizabeth felt lost. What had happened to her that she was so injured? Where was Jane? She thought she remembered Jane last night before her sister tricked her, or had that been a dream?
“Hello?” Elizabeth made a soft cry and when no one responded she felt quite stricken. The pain overcame her and she openly sobbed. How much time passed, she didn’t know, but she was startled in her grief by the door suddenly opening and a strange gentleman appearing.
Elizabeth stared at him and he stiffened in embarrassment.
“Forgive me,” he bowed “I overheard your distress and worried you were alone, Miss Elizabeth.”
Elizabeth opened her mouth, then closed it. The man seemed to know her, but she couldn’t remember who he was for the life of her. Jane had said the assembly already happened, and if she was lying in a bed at Netherfield, perhaps this was Mr. Bingley! Too proud to admit her memory lapse, Elizabeth decided to play it bold.
“Thank you, Mr. Bingley. Could you send for my sister?”
Mr. Darcy eyed her with a quizzical expression but turned to leave. He managed to avoid Jane Bennet as she entered carrying a heavy silver tray. Immediately recovering his manners, he took the tray from Jane and followed her direction to the table beside the bed.
“Thank you, Mr. Darcy.” Jane said with a curtsy.
He bowed, and cleared his throat. “I heard her crying and worried over her injuries. I did not know you were away. That is, I mean, I was concerned she was alone, but I did not intend to come upon her alone.”
Jane smiled and gave a small curtsy again. She met Mr. Darcy sitting in the chair outside this room far too many times to believe he was as unaffected by her sister’s injuries as he pretended. A cool anger still consumed Jane’s heart as this man was the very reason her sister nearly died. Racing on the road so close to a town was irresponsible and unforgivable!
“I am here now. Apparently there was an oversight and the staff was not aware that Miss Bingley had asked for a tray to be brought up.” Jane said through clenched teeth.
Elizabeth watched the stranger and her sister interact and she began to groan. The frustration of not knowing what was going on nor who this man was, and now her complete faux pas for calling him Mr. Bingley swirled in her head. She thought she might vomit.
“Jane, please?” she pleaded with her eyes to make her sister understand. Elizabeth wrinkled up her nose, the small signal the girls had used since they first experienced an imposition, and closed her mouth lest she turn out the contents of her stomach in front of this man.
“Mr. Darcy, my sister needs some privacy.” Jane said, ushering him to the door.
Darcy didn’t argue as he was still mulling what Jane had said about the breakfast tray. He’d have a talk with Bingley about Caroline. Poor treatment of guests was appalling, and a sick one doubly so! He left the ladies as a man on a mission and after a few moments found Bingley setting up billiards.
“I say Darcy, fancy a quick game? It seems a poor time to go riding with Miss Elizabeth so ill.” Bingley held out a cue stick as Darcy shrugged off this coat.
“Mr. Bennet returned to Longbourn?”
Bingley nodded, bending over the table to take his first shot.
“I suppose the news that his daughter awakened last night was enough motivation to abandon her to complete strangers.” Darcy spat out, scowling as Bingley’s first shot hit perfectly and scored the man a point.
Bingley added more chalk to this cue. “I should hope you don’t see the care in my household as unfit, Darce. Besides, there is Miss Bennet remaining. What an angel to sacrifice so for a sister.” Bingley’s eyes gazed up at the perfectly white ceiling, in the direction he knew Jane to be.
Darcy rolled his eyes and took his shot. If Georgiana had been sick, he never would have left her at the home of an acquaintance to fend for her own care. A burning liquid rose up in his chest as he swallowed back down his guilt. Had he not just done something similar in leaving the search for her to others? Shaking his head, his shot went wide. He removed himself from the table to lean against the wall.
“Bingley, speaking of care. You might wish to look into how your staff has been directed to care for the Miss Bennets while they are under your roof.”
Bingley took another shot, narrowly missing a second point. “Caroline takes care of that. I’m sure everything is under good regulation.”
Darcy stepped up to take his shot, pretending to mull over the possibilities. Instead he was weighing if he should tell Bingley about the breakfast tray. Just as he was about to do so, the double doors between the billiard room and the parlor opened and Caroline Bingley stood there with a triumphant smile on her face.
“There you two are! Charles, I’ve been looking everywhere for you and Mr. Darcy. Louisa and I were just planning a fun little picnic this afternoon and wanted you both to be ready at two o’clock.”
Bingley looked to Darcy who returned his stare with an expression of wisdom. Clearing his throat, Bingley attempted a deeper tone than usual. “Caroline, your notion is most disrespectful to our guests. With Miss Elizabeth so taken ill, we shall not be going on a picnic.”
Caroline kept her smile plastered in place. “Oh, she’s not so terribly ill.”
“Did you call on her this morning?” Darcy interrupted, knowing the answer.
“Well, no, I have not, but Miss Bennet did say her sister awoke last night, and I simply thought we should be cheered by this strong sign of recovery.” Caroline continued to flash a brilliant, self-assured smile towards Charles, confident today would be like any other.
“No. No, Caroline!” Bingley banged the bottom of his cue stick on the hunter green carpet anchoring the furniture in the room. “This is beyond the pale, sister. Darcy and I shall not join you on a picnic, and I forbid anyone else in my household to partake in such a diversion while Miss Elizabeth is restricted to her bed. Honestly, Caroline, I don’t know what’s come over you.”
Agitated, Bingley turned his back to his sister and circled the table. He leaned in and took a shot with great force as Caroline quit the room closing the doors behind her.
“Er, Bingley?” Darcy checked a laugh that was close to breaking free from watching Caroline get a set down and at how incensed his affable friend became at his sister’s machinations.
“What?”
Darcy pointed at the table and shrugged. “Nothing, old man. You just took my shot.”
It took a moment, but both men began to laugh at the situation as Bingley struggled to rack the balls. “Go on, Darcy. You break this time.”
Two games more passed before Bingley was crowned the day’s champion, soundly beating Darcy in both despite the one free win he gave earlier.
Chapter 11 - By Consequence of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
Within a week, Elizabeth felt recovered from her head injury, yet her broken ankle required her to stay abed. Never a spirit easily subdued, Elizabeth passed the time with Jane reading aloud, playing a funny little card game from when they were younger where certain numbers meant you told a truth or a lie, and talking of home. Jane tried to interest Elizabeth in some needlework, but the hoop lay mostly neglected as Elizabeth Bennet had never understood the usefulness of an embroidered doily.
After tea one afternoon, while Elizabeth read and Jane sewed by the window, a knock on the door startled both women out of their secret world of sisterly affection. Mr. Darcy appeared with books in hand and bowed low.
“Since it was my folly to cause this injury, I thought perhaps you’d like some new books, Miss Elizabeth? I inquired of your sister for your tastes and had these brought from my town home.”
Elizabeth’s eyes widened as she took stock of the handsome man before her, feeling both pleased and vexed that he brought her books, yet was the very cause of her current pain. Looking to Jane, she nodded and the elder Bennet sister rose to move her chair closer to the bed as Mr. Darcy entered the room. Once settled, Jane returned to her sewing, marring her serene countenance occasionally to glance up and glare at Mr. Darcy.
“I am touched you sent for books from London. Do you bring gifts to every woman you avoid trampling in the street?” Elizabeth asked, making Mr. Darcy cough uncomfortably at her frankness.
“Lizzie!” Jane warned her younger sister, but said nothing more.
“A sound query, but then I should wonder if you are so bold with men who must make haste to avoid you as you meander in the midst of the road.”
His face like stone, Elizabeth was frightened at first she had truly offended him until she noticed his tell. His left nostril flared slightly and Elizabeth couldn’t help but giggle. This encouraged Mr. Darcy to smile in return, and the two spent the rest of the afternoon discussing every book from the Odyssey to specific sonnets of Shakespeare. The only break in their delightful afternoon was when Caroline Bingley arrived to announce dinner. Performing another deep bow, Mr. Darcy exited the room to dress, reluctantly leaving the sisters.
Sighing, Elizabeth slid down in the sheets and laid her arms back. “I suppose if one must stay abed, it is highly convenient for potential suitors to await your beck and call and hold intelligent conversation.”
Jane frowned as she selected a nightgown to help Elizabeth change before she herself would attend dinner.
“If you’re not careful, your behavior will cause chatter.” Jane hummed to herself as she found the hairbrush and ties in her sister’s trunk. When she turned around, Elizabeth was stricken with silent tears and Jane rushed to her side. “Lizzie? Shall I fetch the laudanum?”
“No,” she sobbed, wiping her eyes. “I am not hurt. I simply remember.”
Clucking her tongue, Jane began to pull the pins from her sister’s hair and raked her curls gently with her fingertips. “It must have been a frightful sight to see the horse rear up and nearly strike you.”
Elizabeth shook her head. “He said that. That’s why I ran away. I remember everything, Jane. The assembly, you dancing with Mr. Bingley, John dancing with, dancing with—” she let out a huge sob as Jane embraced her. “Mr. Lucas will never marry me, Jane. I am not held in his esteem nor do I appear an advantageous match.”
Downstairs, ruffled feathers belonged to one Miss Bingley. The party was delayed waiting for her to join them. Caroline Bingley, famously the last dressed and habitually five minutes late to every dinner call, descended the stairs with her smug demeanor only to appear bewildered when she realized they were awaiting Jane.
“Are we not all here?” she asked, innocently, as if she had been the one imposed upon.
“We are yet to be joined by Miss Bennet, and I fear there is something keeping her.” Mr. Bingley glanced furtively at the stairs.
Caroline huffed and began to walk towards the dining room. “A slight foot injury and our lovely country retreat is ruined with two months of playing hospital.”
Darcy finished his private conversation with a maid and as she scurried away to the kitchens, he followed Miss Bingley into the dining room as it appeared all manner of escorts and assigned seating were to be abandoned. “A broken limb is hardly a trifling matter, madam. I once only sustained a sprain as a young lad climbing too many trees and it took many months for the pain to subside.”
Miss Bingley sputtered as her sister joined her side. “How dreadful, Mr. Darcy. I do hope your ankle is well now?”
Darcy blinked. “Perfectly, madam. As I said, I was but a child.”
“Lord, I’m squashed, how about some grub, eh Bingley?” Mr. Hurst found a seat and began motioning with his hands to be served. Bingley scowled at his brother-in-law’s crude behavior, but nodded to the footman just the same and dinner proceeded to arrive from the kitchen.
Upstairs, Jane continued to soothe her sister and tried to remind Elizabeth of the wonderful qualities any man would be lucky to boast in a wife, and they were all encompassed in her. As the girls snuggled in bed, a servant knocked on the door with a tray in hand, allowing the two sisters to eat in peace. Jane didn’t know for sure, but she suspected that Mr. Darcy had seen to the repast and she found that she had a small amount of respect for a man who would see to the care of others.
Another week passed before a rainy day brought Mr. Darcy back to Elizabeth Bennet’s sick room. He happened to come in on the girls playing their card game and politely asked if he might join.
“Oh, this game is too much of a trifle for a gentleman of your caliber, sir. Leave it to us ladies.” Elizabeth gave the cut in all seriousness. After remembering how she came to be bedridden in the enemy’s home, she had sworn off encouraging the attentions of any man, even one so handsomely clothed as Mr. Darcy.
“And gentlemen have no trifles? Surely, Miss Elizabeth, you grant us more amusement in life than a destiny of unabated boredom.”
Elizabeth scowled, frustrated that she was stuck in her prone position. She turned to Jane for help, but her sister only gave a slight smile at Mr. Darcy. So much for sisterly support!
“The game is simple, Mr. Darcy. We each play cards in the middle to make matches of the numbers, if you cannot make a match, then you must play a face card,” Jane explained.
Mr. Darcy pulled a chair from the wall and took off his jacket. He flashed Miss Elizabeth a brilliant smile showing off his dimples as he accepted his hand of cards from Miss Bennet. “And what befalls me when I play a face card, ladies?”
“A knave and you must tell a lie. A queen and you must pay a compliment. A king and you must tell a truth known to but a few.” Elizabeth took his measure as the game began. Much as she wished to dismiss the man outright and return to her father’s home in recuperation, something about his demeanor disarmed her.
“And if I hold no face cards? Then what must I do, a Herculean labor?”
“Nay, nothing so onerous. You simply draw a card until you can play. First one to lose her cards wins.” Miss Elizabeth finished.
“Or he.” Mr. Darcy added.
Elizabeth smiled, cheered to see the bit of competition in him. “Agreed, or he that loses his cards first.”
The game began and the first few rounds saw all of them making matches as it appeared that Jane had not shuffled the deck well from the last game. Elizabeth was the first to play a face card and giggled as she had the best lie. “On nights with a full moon, I love best to borrow father’s breeches and go running through the fields astride the largest stallion in our barn!”
Jane made a face at Elizabeth, but it was Mr. Darcy who cleared his throat. “Pardon me, but I believe we are supposed to tell a lie when we play a knave.”
Elizabeth’s jaw dropped that Mr. Darcy would impugn her integrity to tell such a tale, and Jane covered her mouth to stifle her mirth. “It most certainly is a lie, Mr. Darcy. I hate horses, and prefer walking to riding no matter the distance.”
Darcy nodded, and played a card as Miss Bennet had begun a new round with a six and he had one. Elizabeth, still smarting from his jest at her expense, played a seven and it was Jane who had to play a face card. Her face immediately turned red, as she knew Lizzie would not let her get off with nothing less than a most embarrassing truth. Settling her shoulders back, she decided to be as honest as she cared to be, in hopes to avoid her younger sister’s ribbing.
“I find Mr. Bingley in possession of the most pleasant manners I’ve ever met in a dance partner.” Quickly, Jane turned her eyes back to her cards. Mr. Darcy said nothing and played a nine, hoping Elizabeth did not hold any, but he was to be disappointed when she produced one. Jane played a ten and caught Mr. Darcy wanting.
With a deep breath, Mr. Darcy viewed his face cards and nothing but women smiled up from his hand. Taking out the Queen of Hearts, he played her on the pile and wondered why he had agreed to such a ridiculous game. How was he to compliment one of these women without showing a preference? It was very serious behavior for a man to compliment an unmarried woman, and with his own situation in such disarray, a courtship and marriage was the furthest thing from his mind. Thoughts of Georgiana pained his heart, but provided the necessary inspiration.
“I find I have never witnessed such a powerful bond of sisterly affection as I discern between you, Miss Bennet, and you, Miss Elizabeth.” Both women smiled at this sincere compliment.
The game continued until both Darcy and Elizabeth were down to one card each. Poor Jane had the unfortunate business of multiple draws, so she sat with five cards in her hand. She played a seven, hoping once more to catch Mr. Darcy off his game. Instead, the man stood up from his chair and triumphantly played his last face card, one he held from the start. This accomplished, he fulfilled his final requirement.
“Ladies, I can honestly say this has been the most engaging and pleasant card game I have ever played. Thank you for teaching me.”
Realizing how late the hour was, the group gave their goodbyes and both Jane and Mr. Darcy left to dress for dinner. Elizabeth sighed as they left her to rest. She carefully picked up the cards into a proper deck. As the bottom card was the Queen of Hearts, she wondered at Mr. Darcy’s truth that he was only in Hertfordshire until he heard from his cousin. Whatever it was, as she yawned and realized the afternoon had indeed taxed her strength, she hoped that Mr. Darcy’s cousin would misaddress the letter.
For the Love of a Bennet
What if Elizabeth Bennet traveled with Lydia to Brighton?
A reimagining of Jane Austen’s most beloved tale, Pride & Prejudice, join author Elizabeth Ann West as she writes the romantic adventure story she always wanted! When Lizzy and Lydia arrive in Brighton, it’s very clear that the younger Bennet sister came with very serious plans towards Mr. Wickham. Thankfully, an old ally is also in town, with problems of his own to solve. After Mr. Darcy, himself, is summoned to Brighton to hopefully solve two dilemmas with one wealthy member of the gentry, the whole militia is thrown into an uproar by Wickham’s most dastardly deed, yet. Together, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy have to save Lydia from her own undoing, or it will mean more than just mere reputations are ruined.
For the Love of a Bennet is a novel length story, currently being posted chapter by chapter on Elizabeth’s author site. This story was originally conceptualized in 2019 as a part of the All Go to Brighton challenge.
Chapter 12 - By Consequence of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
Fatigue added weight to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam’s athletic frame as he dragged through his final steps of the day. Spending part of every day and night wandering the streets of London . . .by the docks . . . by the brothels . . . by the warehouses . . . for weeks straight, a deep and dark truth began to grip his heart. He would never find her.
Falling into the chair behind Darcy’s desk in his study, the emotion was too much for the war-ravaged man. He choked up recalling the childish teases his young cousin would play on each of his visits. He could almost hear her small voice echoing around him, “Come Richard, listen to my newest song that Brother bought for me.”
The study door opened and Darcy’s butler carried in a silver tray with Colonel Fitzwilliam’s nightly repast. Looking at the wooden desk covered in notes and mail, the colonel hastily collected a pile of letters so that the tray might be placed before him, but his tired hands knocked a few missives to the floor. The butler bent to retrieve them.
“Leave them, man, get some rest. I may be a bumbling oaf, but I’m one that cleans up after himself.” The Colonel attempted a wan smile.
“As you wish, sir.” The butler bowed and exited the room.
Sighing, the Colonel poured himself a glass of brandy and sipped the golden liquid for rejuvenation. The effects were quick, and the burn down his throat a mere tickle as he often imbibed. With a heavy sigh, he leaned forward in the chair to retrieve the letters when his hand paused in midair. The lettering on the missive was familiar, and once he thought of it, he snatched the letter and ripped it open.
He read the words with his eyes racing back and forth. That scoundrel Wickham was demanding a meeting! Quickly, the Colonel flipped the letter over and searched the date. Why, it was three weeks ago! Frantic, Richard began tossing the letters around looking for more. The raucous search brought the butler back, but upon gazing into the room the man decided not to disturb the Master’s cousin.
Triumphantly clutching five letters, Richard hurried over to the table with the map of London still displayed. He ripped open each letter and looked at the direction, carefully plotting the inns on the map. They all came from the same area, the place by the docks that he had first recommended to Darcy all those weeks ago and had skipped in his searching. With a smug smile on his face, Richard tossed the letters onto the table and walked with a distinct swagger back to the desk. He remained standing erect as he downed the rest of the brandy and then pulled his sagging breeches up over his small paunch. With a loud belch, he opted to retire for a good night’s sleep. In the morning, he had prey to pursue!
You’ve been reading By Consequence of Marriage
By Consequence of Marriage, Book 1 of the Moralities of Marriage
a Pride and Prejudice novel variation series
Release Date: December 23, 2014
65,000 words, ~334 pages in print.
When his horse throws a shoe, Fitzwilliam Darcy misses rescuing his sister, Georgiana Darcy, from the clutches of George Wickham by only one day. Now on the hunt to find them both, the gossip beginning to swirl in London forces him to abdicate the search to his cousin, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, while he plays the wayward gentleman in Hertfordshire with his friend Charles Bingley. After a collision with his future, Darcy struggles to satisfy his attraction to a pair of fine eyes and keep his family’s scandal hidden.
Elizabeth Bennet dreams of nothing more than remaining close to her sister, Jane. When a rich gentleman, Charles Bingley, enters the neighborhood, it seems certain that Jane will make a match with him. After all, Jane Bennet is the sweetest and most beautiful woman in the county! But Elizabeth’s efforts to find her own local match go awry and she feels abandoned by the first man to cause stirrings in her heart. Her parents attempt to marry Elizabeth off to her cousin, William Collins, who is set to inherit the estate. But when she refuses, she soon finds herself In London with relatives, forced to find her own happiness.
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