So the next book I AM writing is Book 5 in THIS SERIES! I’ve been reacquainting myself with this whole story line and PHEW is it drama, drama, llama (actually, I don’t have a llama in this series , hmmm). 🙂 I will be scheduling the remainder of this book and the 4th book to post as I’m writing Book 5 and it’s going to be a fun spring! Join #TheJaneside on Facebook as I will be taking orders there for “easter eggs” like in If Mr. Darcy Dared the “Friends” challenge and in The Whiskey Wedding, the MacGuffin… 🙂Â
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Chapter 22 - The Blessing of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
“AND THAT’S AN ORDER FROM THE MASTER!” Richard Fitzwilliam bellowed at the sniveling butler of Rosings who wisely, and apologetically bowed and slowly backed away. Alone in the refashioned study, removed of all traces of the medieval stylings preferred by his predecessor, Richard looked around for something, anything, to throw. Sadly bereft of any object of no consequence, he settled for slamming the chair into the worn wooden desk, yet another item in this run-down estate on his list for replacement.
The study door opened and the thin figure of his wife and dearest friend slipped in with a look of grave concern.
“Mother has caused problems again?”
Richard sighed and offered his hand to assist Anne to the pale green settee moved in from the drawing room. “No sooner do I give a direction that she moves to undo it. Why are the staff so thick as to think she still rules this house?”
“Give them time, Mother has ruled with an iron fist for many decades, and even when my father was alive, he never challenged much to do with her domain.”
“Who ran the ledger? Darcy must have explained how her habits bled the coffers dry?” Richard thought specifically of how he had just curtailed the budget for wine and Lady Catherine signed the invoice for yet another dozen crates of merlot.
Anne shrugged her shoulders and grimaced.
“My dear, we’ve spoken of this, cough if you need to, it clears your lungs.”
Anne complied with a nasty hack and swift movement of her handkerchief to her mouth to catch the wet contents. Gasping for breath, she flattened her left palm against her sternum.
“Easy, easy, the breathing will come easier.” Richard coaxed his wife down from her attack, scolding himself for upsetting her.
In time, Anne began to feel normal again and asked for a cup of tea. Richard pulled the bell cord without delay, and then returned to tending his wife. A servant entered and accepted the request without argument.
“Forgive me for troubling you, I know better than to burden you with these matters.”
Anne shook her head. “You promised to not treat me as the others do, and I have promised to listen to Doctor Matthews.” Mrs. Fitzwilliam beamed at her husband. The last few weeks she had greatly enjoyed free roam of her home and a release of the burden of her father’s secrets. The last desire of Anne Fitzwilliam was a return to the strictures imposed by her mother for reasons of her health. “If you must banish me to bed rest, I insist you prescribe the same medicine for yourself.” Anne pursed her lips into an impish pucker as she watched her husband’s face color.
“I have retired the Regimentals, but this soldier will still carry you off, Mrs. Fitzwilliam, for great debauchery.”
“Mmm, is that another promise, Richard?” She giggled as her husband leaned forward to lay kisses on her delicate jawline as she turned and pretended to resist his advances. A sharp knock on the door interrupted their tryst.
“Enter.”
A maid carried in a tray and Richard lifted himself from the settee, before he was in no proper state to do so, to handle the refreshments. Yes, he had just been reminded to not coddle his wife, his loving, passionate wife, but no matter what she desired, it did not change that she was of a delicate condition. He instantly noticed only one pot held tea leaves while the other merely hot water with slices of lemon.
“What is the meaning of this? I specifically requested tea for both myself and Mrs. Fitzwilliam.”
The young maid did not look up as she answered with a small curtsy. “Her ladyship has said that Miss Anne, forgive me, Mrs. Fitzwilliam may not indulge in tea during the daylight hours per instruction from Doctor Smeads.”
“And I say that my wife may indulge in any foods or beverages she may fancy at any time of day, am I making myself clear?” Richard had to grind his teeth to keep his anger from his meddling mother-in-law spilling out against the poor maid.
“Yes, sir.” The young maid curtsied again, still not looking up.
Richard did not dismiss the maid as he poured his own pot of tea for his wife’s comfort. “What is your name?”
The maid finally looked up with her lip quivering. “Julia—Julia White, sir.”
“And what is your role here? A housemaid?”
The young girl nodded, trying to remain brave. Julia White was only recently hired on to the house that past spring from the employment fair. She had worked hard to stay out of trouble the other young maids found around them, fraternizing with the footmen or sneaking spirits. As a result, she had yet to make friends in the great house and routinely felt confused at the seemingly contradictory orders issued on a daily basis.
“Yes, sir, I’ve not yet been employed here for two months.”
“Consider yourself promoted.” Richard tenderly placed the cup of tea made just for his wife’s preferences before her, catching her eye for approval. Anne bit back a smile and nodded.
“Promoted? Sir?” Julia wore a look fraught with worry. To receive a new position over the girls who had been there longer would not make life easier in the servant’s quarters.
“Indeed. Mrs. Fitzwilliam is in need of a personal maid. You will assist her during coughing fits and see that whatever she needs is delivered without delay. Should any other servants give you trouble, including your superiors, you shall do whatever you deem necessary to fulfill your duties to Mrs. Fitzwilliam at that moment, and then seek me out afterwards. Am I clear?”
Julia shook her head. “I cannot perform the duties of a ladies’ maid, begging your pardon, sir. I have not yet been taught.”
“Did I say you would be her ladies’ maid? No, recruit, consider yourself charged with her well-being.” Richard marched forward, closer to the maid, to give her mettle a more thorough inspection. The young woman stood straighter as her employer neared her person and in her eyes, Richard recognized the hunger of a person bent on proving themselves. Years of training England’s finest had taught him the difference between those signed up for duty out of obligation and those signed up with pride to perform. This maid possessed the later whether she recognized it or not.
“Can you tend to my wife on a daily basis, from sun up to when she retires, without allowing another to hamper your efforts?”
Julia gulped but faced her employer with a courageous expression. “Yes, sir. And if any thwart my efforts, I am to report to you as soon as I am able.”
“Correct. I want you to look at that woman sitting on the settee. You may not know this, but there is no greater treasure in this household to me than she. I am entrusting you with the greatest role and expecting you to rise to the task. If you falter, I shall replace you with another and there will not be another position for you here.”
“Yes, sir.”
“Good, now Julia, please see to Mrs. Fitzwilliam’s comfort while I return this tray to the kitchens and have a word with Cook.”
“Richard! You cannot carry the tray yourself!” Anne called out as she beckoned the young maid to come further into the room so she might have her own conversation with her newly assigned caretaker.
Richard lifted the tray and raised his eyes at his wife. “I shall carry the tray and throw it if necessary. The staff is finished with serving two masters, and it is I who shall triumph over Catherine.”
Anne covered her mouth at the ridiculousness of her strong, manly husband opening the study door and carrying the tea tray in a superb posture to rival a practiced servant. Realizing her interview with her husband was indeed over, Anne turned her attentions to the young Julia shifting her weight from foot-to-foot.
“Can you read, Julia?”
“Yes, ma’am. I had hopes to be a school teacher in Lydd, but it was not to be. Would you like for me to read to you? Would that provide you comfort?”
“Yes, I prefer novels. Come. We shall visit the library and then retire to my apartments. And we shall see if some of my old gowns will fit you. If you are to be taking on the position of my protector and caretaker when Richard is unavailable, let’s have you look the part.”
Anne reached out for the young maid to assist her up and Julia scrambled to understand the dramatically new course her own life had just taken in less than a quarter hour. Following her mistress down the long corridor to the library, she counted her many blessings that were appearing to avalanche all at once. For a brief moment, Julia White forgot all about her troubles of being late to come into service and possessing no friends amongst the staff. The days ahead held the promise of a new job, one she was most eager to take on even if it was only the result of luck in volunteering to take a tea tray to the study.
Chapter 23 - The Blessing of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
The hot stagnant air of the afternoon further dimmed the spirits of Caroline Bingley and Georgiana Darcy as they lounged in the drawing room at Darcy House in London. Georgiana laid plump upon the divan, languishly fanning herself with only momentary pauses to pluck another candied fruit from the platter. Caroline sat at the writing desk, furiously scribbling letters to all of her acquaintances.
Casting a slanted eye towards the spoiled sixteen-year-old wife of a worthless brute, Caroline pursed her lips. “I certainly hope you enjoy those candies. That mistress of his cutting off the household budgets, there won’t be any more fine foods in this house.”
“My brother is such a beast! He jumps and rushes to her side before she can even sigh and when he is not doing that, he’s away from the house at all hours. It’s patently unfair.” Georgiana held up a slice of tangerine, inspecting the morsel encapsulated in a glistening sheen of sugar before placing the sickeningly sweet and tart fruit in her mouth. “But at least they’re gone now.”
“Perhaps you might wish to assist me and my machinations?”
Georgiana lifted her head up from the fainting couch ever so slightly to give Caroline a look of utter disgust. “Write letters in hopes someone invites us to a dinner or ball?” Georgiana huffed back against the sofa. “I should rather accept my misery as it will be short-lived. My maid tells me they did not go to Scotland, but back to that Netherfield house of your brothers.”
Gleefully grinning at the ceiling, the younger woman began to enumerate the evidence on her fingers. “She won’t be of age until late August, and I highly doubt her father will consent to a marriage now. Not after her name is been dragged in every puddle of mud between here and Piccadilly.” Georgiana began to giggle at the success of their plans before realizing her favorite fruit slices were gone. Then she pouted, only to realize no one was there to react. She pushed the empty platter, the direct result of her overindulgence, away so that it slid halfway down the table.
Caroline’s posture shot up an extra inch and a half at the news the caravan that left just that very morning was not on its way to Scotland. If Mr. Darcy had delayed, perhaps he was having second thoughts and planned to deliver that ungrateful wench to her father. Caroline had heard Charles and Jane speak enough, and she was there that evening Mr. Bennet came for dinner. If anyone hated Mr. Darcy more than Mr. Bennet, Caroline could not name them.
“We might still appeal to your aunt, Lady Matlock? She may yet offer us a few dinners and social engagements. You cannot honestly wish to eat the Cook’s mystery vittles stew for a month.”
“I had not begun to try working on Cook. I see it as, what was it George always said…” Georgiana frowned as she thought hard, many of her memories of her husband swirling together, a process naturally diminishing the dreadful ones in power as nostalgia heightened the good times, even though they were very few. “Ahh, yes, she has won the battle but not the war! There are many staff members here that I might apply pressure or aid in order to get what I want. I just thought I might wait at least one day before throwing my fits.”
Caroline returned to her letter, forcing herself to think of the nice pleasantries she was sending to Sarah Milbanke over her recent engagement to the Lord Strange instead of the ungrateful and quite rude remarks she wished to lob at the child wearing a lady’s gown. If Georgiana thought the only way to get her way in this world was to throw a temper tantrum, Caroline could scarcely count her as an ally. She was running out of time to do something grand in order to attract Mr. Darcy’s notice. So far, she had achieved sullying that Bennet girl’s name beyond repair, but unless she could do something to get rid of that George Wickham, Mr. Darcy would never acknowledge her as the woman best designed for his side.
“Would you like to send Sarah any regards?” Caroline asked with a light voice.
“That harpy? I should rather watch her trip out of her carriage and land face first in horse manure.” Georgiana giggled again.
“She is set up to become a very powerful adversary in your home county. She will one day be the Countess of Derby, do you think it wise to begin a break in that relationship?” Caroline chided Georgiana’s insolent behavior with the clicking of her tongue. What this young lady needed more than ever was a finishing school with the harshest headmistress imaginable.
“It is not I who ruined the relationship, but she. She had no regard for me when she came for tea, and she utterly insulted me at the end of her visit by rejecting an invitation without even so much as a date.”
Caroline sighed and added that Georgiana sends her warmest regards in spite of her young companion’s choice in the matter. Pulling another letter from her correspondence to read over before writing a reply, a name stuck out that gave Caroline a brilliant idea.
“Georgiana, how are you at playing cards?”
A grimace flashed on her face but for a moment before she started a reply. “I-I am able to play, but I am not very good,” she managed.
“That may be more perfect than you even know. Go upstairs and find your best frock. The one you wear to the opera should suffice.”
“Why? Why should I dress for some grand evening we won’t be enjoying?”
Caroline gracefully rose from the hardback chair where she had been writing and flexed her fingers in a ladylike release from the cramped exercise. She positively floated to the sofa with grace and took her time to take a seat in order that Georgiana might sit in a more dignified position. When the younger lady refused to move, Caroline flashed her another glare of disapproval and Georgiana hurriedly scurried her legs off the sofa and back to the floor. Regally, Caroline lowered herself to the dark blue fainting couch and slowly turned to her charge.
“I have some funds, enough for at least one evening’s pleasure.The Whitcomb house is always open for gambling and carousing, and it’s a frequent place of Lord Strange and his ilk. We shall go tonight as if we are invited and none shall say to the contrary so long as we lose. If we lose a little bit of money, we shall be invited back. And to other dinners and events. Do you understand?”
“But if you have funds, why do we not just use those to buy better food for this house?”
Caroline patted Georgiana’s hand in a patronizing manner. “You have so much to learn, this is an investment. An investment into our social futures. We cannot make stronger connections dining here night after night as two solitary women. Now go above stairs and instruct your maid to help you with a full beauty regime. Head to heel, you must sparkle.”
At the mention of sparkling, Georgiana looked down at her lap. Caroline instantly knew the problem and used her finger to tip the young girls chin back up. “Do not be ashamed, I have plenty of baubles and jewels that you might borrow some. To put a smile on your face, I promise this evening will be highly diverting.”
Georgiana still only appeared half convinced by Caroline’s rousing speech, but she obeyed and left the drawing room to retire above stairs and call for a bath. Caroline, meanwhile, remained in the drawing room fully dismayed not a crumb of the repast remained on the tray for her own refreshment. Looking at the clock, she reasoned she could give another quarter hour to more correspondence just in case tonight’s dive into the fastest London set did not pan out as she anticipated.
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What if Elizabeth Bennet traveled with Lydia to Brighton?
A reimagining of Jane Austen’s most beloved tale, Pride & Prejudice, join author Elizabeth Ann West as she writes the romantic adventure story she always wanted! When Lizzy and Lydia arrive in Brighton, it’s very clear that the younger Bennet sister came with very serious plans towards Mr. Wickham. Thankfully, an old ally is also in town, with problems of his own to solve. After Mr. Darcy, himself, is summoned to Brighton to hopefully solve two dilemmas with one wealthy member of the gentry, the whole militia is thrown into an uproar by Wickham’s most dastardly deed, yet. Together, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy have to save Lydia from her own undoing, or it will mean more than just mere reputations are ruined.
For the Love of a Bennet is a novel length story, currently being posted chapter by chapter on Elizabeth’s author site. This story was originally conceptualized in 2019 as a part of the All Go to Brighton challenge.
Chapter 24 - The Blessing of Marriage, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
Three days passed before the eldest son of the Fitzwilliam family had been sobered and scrubbed. Margaret Fitzwilliam arose from her afternoon rest to loud voices in her husband’s study. The voices grew louder and louder as her maid, Verna, helped her into a fresh gown and new hairstyle. Shooing away her trusted servant, the Countess of Matlock inhaled deeply before descending the staircase of the townhouse. Her mind ticked off the various items on her list of tasks to remind herself of the other work she must complete, complete that is after she prevented her husband and first born from harming one another.
Without disturbing either man, she slipped into the study and watched the epic battle of bullheaded masculinity.
“I’ll cut you off!”
“Be my guest, is there anything left in the coffers, Father?”
Henry Fitzwilliam’s face began to turn a deep shade of burgundy as his temper rose. “Yes! More than enough, and when I die, you shall be penniless and in the streets!”
“I have friends who will support me,” The Viscount Brahmington replied in a bored tone, spying his mother standing by the door.
“And when the friends no longer support you there will be no money . . .” Lady Matlock strolled forward to lay a calming hand on her husband’s arm. “For any of us, are you so selfish, Jamie?”
The pet name of his youth brought a scowl to their son’s face and he refused to meet his mother’s eye.
“Look at me. Look into my eyes and tell me you will not marry that girl and then live however you’d like. Die after the first week of marriage with that horrid habit of yours.” James Fitzwilliam lifted his head to look at his mother, his father’s mouth agape at his wife’s firmness and success in making their wayward son see reason.
“But you always say you fear I shall die and now you wish it so? Truly, it appears you love money above all else, Mother.”
Lady Fitzwilliam smiled sweetly at her obstinate offspring and gripped her husband’s arm tighter. “On the contrary, I love both of my sons. You are but one of them.”
Releasing her husband’s arm, Lady Fitzwilliam took two steps forward to hold her son’s face, a face marred and sullen from months of abuse. “You are grown and have made your choices. Perhaps we did not snatch you up enough and whip you for your indulgent behaviors. But Richard, behind you, will make a fine earl.”
James shook his face free of his mother’s hands and leaned away from her. “Then why not make him marry the Duke’s third daughter?”
“Because Richard is already married to your cousin, Anne, and you need this. Consider this your last gift from us because there is not a penny more for your allowance.”
The study door opened once more and Lady Fitzwilliam’s trusted footman, Seamus, appeared and bowed low to his lady. “Seamus, you remember our son, James. Please see to it he is escorted to his usual room, and kept there. Four meals a day and if he gives you any trouble, feel free to beat him where the marks will not show.”
“Mother!”
The burly footman grinned and marched forward to urge the young Viscount up from his chair by his closer proximity alone. Unnerved by the tall brute towering over him, Viscount Brahmington leaped from his seat, lunging at his mother. This was a mistake.
Before the earl could move, the ever-loyal Seamus grabbed the viscount with one arm and pulled him back to the chair, toppling both as paper dolls. The sudden fall knocked the wind out of the viscount’s lungs, but once he had his breath, he began hollering and flailing his arms.
“You cad! You devil! How dare you raise a hand to your mother!” The earl leaned forward to help the footman pick up the insolent heir, but could offer little help other than to right the chair. There was no doubt that the footman had the half-living man well in hand.
Lady Matlock leaned back against the desk taking measured breaths, intent on showing no sign of distress. As her son was carried out of the room, with another footman assisting Seamus at the door, a visibly shaken earl pulled his wife into an embrace. Tears fell down Margaret Fitzwilliam’s face as she released the pain in her heart at seeing for herself the ravaged body that was their son.
“Oh, Henry, it is far worse than we feared.”
“I know, I know. But a few weeks of fattening him up will go a long way to hide the damage. And we can hold a fete in the country to keep his associates away.”
“Shall you send word to Percy?”
The earl tightened his hold on his wife before releasing her completely. Slowly, he shook his head. “No, I shall speak to him in person, if you have James in hand?”
Margaret Fitzwilliam hastily wiped her tears and sniffed, restoring her visage as the grand lady of her household and family. “I shall make him rue the day he ever began that habit of his, and Cook shall make all of his favorite foods. The boy will eat!” She pecked his cheek before leaving her husband’s domain.
Collapsing into his chair, the Earl of Matlock fingered the letter from Hugh Percy, Duke of Northumberland, asking to meet at the club that very evening. It was not a letter, but a summons. Months of laying low from last autumn’s disastrous harvest and poor investments were finally coming to bear as creditors sent bill after bill. It would not be long before proper legal action began and without the Duke’s protections and assurances, there was no telling how far his enemies would go to seek their portion.
Mending a quill with gusto, the Earl of Matlock penned his response and handed it to a footman to hand deliver. If the Percy family ordered him to jump into the Thames with not a stitch of clothing on it, Henry Fitzwilliam would comply. The noose of a twenty thousand pound debt scuffed his neck in every waking moment, and the risk of it tightening made him a desperate man.
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Book 3 of the Moralities of Marriage. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet find nothing but a mess in London after they escape Kent. The town home bare and the Wickhams caught up in Lord Strange’s illegal business venture, Darcy has little choice but to make unsavory friends as Elizabeth heals from her cousin’s attack. With the support of the Bingleys, Darcy and Elizabeth are finally ready to secure their future at the anvil in Gretna Green when Elizabeth has one small request.Â
A novel of 55,000 words, The Blessing of Marriage continues the rewriting of Jane Austen’s amazing story of Pride and Prejudice, wondering what might have happened if Darcy never saved Georgiana from the clutches of Mr. Wickham.
The Blessing of Marriage, Book 3 of the Moralities of Marriage
a Pride and Prejudice novel variation series
Release Date:Â March 14, 2016
310 pages in print.
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Thank you for sharing your talent. This is so very enjoyable.
Poor Lord and Lady Matlock!!!! It is so sad what addiction can do!!!