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Chapter 15- If Mr. Darcy Dared
A little fall of rain kept the gentlemen away on Monday, but the weather improved enough for notes to pass between the two estates by Tuesday afternoon. Elizabeth had received a few precious lines from her Mr. Darcy, eagerly anticipating her visit later that week. She could not help but sigh as she held the message to her chest.
Dearest Elizabeth,
I write feeling great agitation to share with you the sentiments that have pent up in the days since we last saw one another. You haunt me, Madam, or at least the ghost of you performs the task. As I sit in the drawing room, Charles is finding a new activity every quarter hour. I am reminded of your visit less than a month ago. I may have never expressed the esteem and admiration I felt watching you care for your sister with such little regard for your own safety and comfort.
Many nights I could hear you traverse the hall, returning to your room at so late an hour. Perhaps I ought to confess that more than once I cracked my door open to see the shadow pass my door. And it shall positively shock you that my baser instincts planted the seed in my consciousness of what if you should have come to call at my door that night? I should have been delighted, more than you could ever know, and I fear I might be even less of a gentleman than I have managed to display in the times we have been alone.
Elizabeth began to giggle and glanced briefly at her sister across the room. Her letter from Mr. Bingley was making her equally blush, so Elizabeth felt no guilt in continuing her own.
I write these confessions not to frighten you; indeed I regret that too much of my heart still fears that. But to say that your presence stirs in me a passion I am unacquainted with before these moments, and my heart races with such fervor, I find myself distracted thoroughly in anticipation of the next time we might meet. I catch myself devising ways to steal a few moments alone, and though you have not yet met my cousin, a colonel in the army, he would tease me relentlessly over my poor skills of strategy. So please, Madam, if you hold any devices or arts to aid in this cause, know that you will do this poor man a charitable act. I believe the poets lied when they wrote lines of prose about heartache. It is a most miserable condition, and one I should pray you are relieved of in my absence, but selfishly hope you love me as much as I love you.
I can only add, God bless you.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY
Across the room from her, Jane’s eyebrows knit into a single line of worry as she held two notes from Netherfield Park.
“Jane?” Elizabeth tucked her note from Mr. Darcy into her trunk on the left side of the bed before joining Jane by the window.
“I’m afraid I may have terrible news,” Jane said, holding both letters open in her hands at either side of her waist. Elizabeth approached and held out her palm, and her sister had to look between the two before she finally selected the note in her left hand to pass over.
Chapter 15 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)
Elizabeth’s eyes quickly scanned from top to bottom to see who wrote the letter Jane was willing to share, and it was none other than that harpy Caroline Bingley. The letter began:
Dear Jane,
As I write to you this letter my trunks are being packed! Wish me luck as I am to finally leave this county that seems so keen on spoiling my spirits with dreary weather. Though the company is quite excellent among some families, surely you can understand how much I desperately miss my friends in London. I am afraid I have received many invitations to the smartest balls for the New Year and Twelfth Night; I just had to explain to my dear brother that I must away. Charles is so soon to be married; he shall hardly need me, a sullen sister, to run his table. I shall return for the wedding with Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, and I do hope you will keep in touch. Please send all correspondence to the direction of the Hurst townhouse . . .
Elizabeth stopped reading as the letter went on to give a specific address in London. She scoffed at the audacity of Miss Bingley, abandoning her brother just before the wedding.
“How dare she! She knows very well that we are to dine tomorrow, and now we shall have to cancel the entire affair!”
To Elizabeth’s shock, her sister Jane did not cluck her tongue in sympathy or try to calm her down. Instead, she witnessed her elder sister make a facial expression that was utterly foreign to Elizabeth’s experience with her closest confidant in all the world.
Jane licked her lips and looked at the letter she still held in her right hand.
“I daresay Miss Bingley did not write to Mama,” Jane observed.
Chapter 15 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)
Elizabeth’s mouth hung open in surprise. Then she slowly began to nod. “I was present when the post arrived: parcels for father and a note from Aunt Phillips. Our letters were the only correspondence from Netherfield.” Elizabeth reinforced Jane’s supposition. Now it was Elizabeth’s turn to share an uncharacteristic expression, one of apprehension.
As Elizabeth handed the letter from Caroline Bingley back to her sister, Jane doubled down on their gambit. Very calmly, she walked over to the fire and cast the parchment to the flames.
“Bravo!” Elizabeth said. Jane smiled broadly when she turned around once the letter had reduced to nothing but ash.
“I hope you do not feel I have performed badly. But I cannot bear to go another day without seeing Charles.” Jane confessed
Elizabeth heartily nodded and approached her sister to embrace her. “I can say much the same thing about Fitzwilliam.”
The two young women shared a small squeal as it was one of the few moments in which they both acknowledged they were equally engaged to be married with nothing but excitement and love in their futures. The door to their bedroom opened and Mrs. Bennet appeared in the doorway, quite flustered.
“Well, what is it? Don’t tell me the gentlemen have decided to dine away tomorrow.” Mrs. Bennet said.
The two girls shared a conspiratorial wink, yet it was Jane who addressed her mother. “No Mama, both Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley are eager for our attendance.”
Over his wife’s shoulder, Mr. Bennet peered into the bedroom, seemingly to inspect the fracas. He sniffed. “So which one of them wrote two notes? My money is on Mr. Bingley.”
As Elizabeth was about to speak, Jane beat her in the timing.
“You know him well, Papa. The first note expressed how excited he was for I do believe Mr. Bingley dearly loves to entertain. And then the second note asked for me to send any requests Lizzy or I have of the staff so that he might prepare.”
As Mrs. Bennet entered the room and fawned over both of her girls for their great luck, Mr. Bennet frowned.
“Well I’ve made the carriage available for both of your use tomorrow and there will be no changes to that arrangement,” Mr. Bennet pronounced, hinting at the disaster of the last time Jane called at Netherfield Park and her mother had made her go on horseback. Jane had caught a cold, and she was stranded at Mr. Bingley’s home for nearly a week, with Elizabeth joining her.
Mrs. Bennet wheeled around to look at her husband as though he were a strange creature indeed.
“Certainly they will take the carriage; we cannot risk a single sniffle with Jane’s wedding so soon. Elizabeth may fall ill and recover, but not Jane. I’ve already informed the younger girls that if they wish to see their aunt in Meryton, they must walk.”
Mr. Bennet groaned as the conversation turned to selecting attire a full day ahead of the invitation. Satisfied his desires for the girls’ transportation would be fulfilled, he smirked as he wondered if his wife’s wishes had been opposite if she wouldn’t go out and sabotage the carriage herself.
Entering his study, Mr. Bennet picked up a long, rectangular parcel bound in brown paper and twine. He cut the wrapping and pulled out a new book from his brother in London, Mr. Gardiner. As he settled in for an afternoon of reading, he breathed a sigh of relief that his part of the wedding planning began and ended with the contracts and paying the expenses.
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There appears to be one passage duplicated from the previous chapter, where the pastor reads the bans and the crowd gasps as the second set is not Lizzy and Darcy. If it fits into this chapter, I’m not sure how, but thought you’d like to know. Great story! I preordered back in December and am looking forward to its release later today.
Thankfully that is NOT in the manuscript, that’s a miss copy and paste by me when I was trying to post 4 chapters before I had to leave to do something for my daughter. 🙂
Thank you so much for your preorder, though. I’m a lot biased, but I simply love this story. 🙂
Oh dear, they will be unchaperoned. What mischief will they get into?
Jane throws Caroline’s letter in the fire as she realises Caroline’s attempts to sabotage her brother’s upcoming marriage and Jane and Elizabeth will have an opportunity to show off their superior skills at housekeeping and impress Charles
Oh, Jane and Elizabeth will arrive unchaperoned? Maybe Elizabeth will get an earlier wedding after all.