The day after Christmas, I received terrible news that my grandfather was in ICU. Thankfully, he has pulled through, but I spent 2.5 weeks unplanned just north of Chicago where I was born and then came home to upstate NY to promptly fall sick with that nasty cold/flu thing that is going around. Today is the first day I am feeling human again, and as a result of the travel and illness, the direct preorder of this book was moved to end of February (all people with orders were notified last week), and as soon as I have a complete draft, I will post links to other vendors’ preorders at $9.99 (Amazon, Kobo, Google, iTunes, Nook. paperback). The direct preorder is still only $7.99 and you will get the book 1 week before anyone else. Thank you so much for all of your support!
XOXOXO Elizabeth Ann West
Chapter 5 - If Mr. Darcy Dared
With the addition of Mr. Collins to the Bennet household, attending the ball at Netherfield Park required two carriages. Mrs. Bennet proclaimed their older carriage too shabby for service, and she arranged with her sister Phillips for them to call upon Longbourn with their carriage from Meryton on their way to the ball. As Mrs. Bennet, Jane, Lydia, Kitty, and Mr. Collins boarded the first carriage, Elizabeth had hung back to make sure there was no room for her. Sadly, this meant not riding with her favorite sister, but it also spared Elizabeth from riding with her mother and Mr. Collins. Instead, she joined her aunt and uncle’s carriage with her father and Mary.
“My eyes may yet deceive me, but from your expression I would think you unhappy for this evening’s activities, Lizzy, and I fear that it is only I who plan to be disappointed,” Mr. Bennet gently teased his favorite daughter to hide the fact he felt concerned.
Elizabeth shrugged her shoulders as Mary tried to engage their father, but Mr. Bennet was not to be dissuaded.
“Elizabeth Constance, if you frown any harder I’m afraid you might make your Aunt Phillips cry. What vexes you daughter? Is it this business about dancing with Mr. Collins first?” Mr. Bennet tried again and once more, Elizabeth remained silent as Mary piped up.
“But I am to dance the first set with him! She engaged Mr. Darcy for the first.” Mary beamed in a rare display of girlish youth compared to her solemn disposition when she was quoting sermons and Scripture.
Sitting between her sister and her father, Elizabeth shrank back against the bench, wishing with all of her mind that she might disappear entirely from the carriage and be excused from the evening’s folly. But no such power rested within her hands.
Mr. Bennet rubbed his chin as he pleasantly engaged in discussion with his brother by marriage about the recent encampment of the militia in their small village. Uncle Phillips expressed concern that more than a few merchants had visited his office that afternoon. A number of the soldiers appeared to be spending beyond their means and with the announcement that the regiment would move on come spring, many held worry that they would not be paid their portion when the quarterly pay came in.
“Those who are worried should act by comparing accounts of soldiers in their stores and denying further credit. More than one village has felt the sting of unpaid debts when a unit moves on.” Mr. Bennet gave his counsel remembering the last time Meryton had been selected for such an honor, though Mr. Phillips had yet to come to clerk under old Mr. Timmons, may he rest in peace.
As Elizabeth listened to her father and uncle, her conversation with Lieutenant Wickham came to mind. She felt cross with herself that she did not bring up the contents of his complaints against Mr. Darcy when she interviewed him that afternoon, but perhaps her father had wise words to share. She was about join the conversation when her Aunt Phillips shared an ominous piece of information.
“And while Colonel Forster and some of his officers plan to attend, I’m afraid your girls will be upset to learn that their favorite, Mr. Wickham, will not be able to delight us with his presence.”
Without helping herself, Elizabeth interjected. “I bet it was Mr. Darcy’s doing. He hates Mr. Wickham,” Elizabeth said to the bewildered looks of the three elder patrons in the carriage.
Chapter 5 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)
“I am not certain it was Mr. Darcy,” Phillips began tentatively, “Colonel Forster shared at tea this afternoon that Lieutenant Wickham volunteered for guard duty. It was most unusual, because he has spoken so much of wishing to go that his request to stay at the garrison was the last request Colonel Forrester expected to receive,” As the Philipses and Mr. Bennet chuckled, Uncle Phillips explored a possible cause.
“Perhaps the poor chap lost the privilege of going to the ball with a bad set of cards!” The adults in the carriage laughed harder as Elizabeth vehemently shook her head.
“It was Mr. Darcy! Mr. Wickham told me how Mr. Darcy had cheated him out of his inheritance and cut him off even though Mr. Wickham grew up beside Mr. Darcy at Pemberley.” Elizabeth felt a return of the sour feeling in her stomach as Mary gave her a sharp elbow on her left side. All laughter ceased and Mr. Bennet cleared his throat.
“How extraordinary. If Mr. Darcy is such a villain as you claim, why did you accept his request for the first set?” Mr. Bennet asked.
Again, Elizabeth shrugged. She had no explanation for the confusing and chaotic decisions she had made in the last fortnight. Her every instinct had warned her away from Mr. Darcy yet her sister requested she afforded him kindness. And like Mr. Wickham, it seemed to Elizabeth that she too would endure the cruelty of Mr. Darcy with no explanation as to his motive for harm.
“While my wife and your sisters have enjoyed the charms of Mr. Wickham, I’m inclined to believe that in a dispute between two gentlemen there are likely two sides to the story. Has Mr. Darcy confirmed he denied Mr. Wickham his inheritance?” Uncle Phillips, a barrister, played the advocate of fairness he used to settle minor disputes among clients.
Elizabeth bit her lower lip and gently shook her head.
“Well, now, I must say that I’m very much looking forward to this evening!” Mr. Bennet laughed. “We will have to discover who is the true villain? What a mystery! Is it Mr. Darcy?” he asked, to no one in particular. Mr. Bennet leaned forward to place his face in the way of Elizabeth’s view as she stared at the bottom of the carriage. “Or is it the wayward lieutenant who found a last-minute excuse to hide away from society?” Seeing his daughter’s eyes widen, Mr. Bennet assumed his point was made. As he sat back in his seat properly, he drummed his fingers along his chin as he hummed in amusement.
“You believe Mr. Wickham’s absence makes his story suspicious?” Mary asked, relieving Elizabeth as she wished to ask something similar, but could not form the words.
Mr. Bennet and Uncle Phillips exchanged glances before looking at the girls. It was Uncle Phillips who cleared his throat to answer.
“It is unusual for one gentleman to spread such vivid tales about another and yet avoid confrontation. I hesitate to say Mr. Wickham has behaved like an old hen, but apart from his word, what evidence do we have to the contrary?”
“I have an idea! You are to dance with him, Lizzy, you can find out from Mr. Darcy where the truth lies. Casually bring up Lieutenant Wickham and note his response. Perhaps we shall know by the evening’s end which man stands correct,” Aunt Phillips shimmied her shoulders in triumph at her grand plan as Elizabeth sunk lower in her seat.
It was too dark outside to see their progress towards Netherfield Park. Elizabeth did not wish to agree to any interrogation of Mr. Darcy. In fact, she wished to avoid dancing with him altogether. Pretending to twist her ankle as she stepped out of the carriage would also spare her dancing with her cousin! Without enough time to think through her plan more carefully, the carriage came to startling halt and her father leaned closer to whisper to her:
“I do not know what trouble you have tangled yourself in my dearest, but I am confident that you shall see your way out. Whether Mr. Darcy is the villain or not, there is no one at this ball who shall harm you.”
Elizabeth sighed and nodded to acknowledge she understood her father. She didn’t reply as there was no time when the carriage doors were opened.
After the great fuss of leaving the carriages, Elizabeth did not stumble or otherwise fall in a way to pretend an injury. But she did make a direct path to link arms with her sister, Jane. Together they looked up at the grand home before them lit by footmen holding torches. The white plastered columns eerily glowed in a silvery hue to frame an Italian inspired portico when the clouds above them parted, revealing a full moon. The girls huddled together and squealed softly as the anticipation rattled both of their nerves.
The receiving line into Netherfield stretched through the main front doors and down the steps on both sides as it appeared Mr. Bingley had invited not just the militia, but every family in the nearest ten miles with a respectable name. Jane and Elizabeth stood together as they awaited their turn to formally greet their host and hostess with Jane remarking on the kind nature of Mr. Bingley to hold such a fete for their neighborhood.
“I did spy one group of officers, but I do not see the man you find so amiable, Mr. Wickham.” Jane stood nary an inch taller than her sister, but her nervous energy outmatched Lizzy’s by a long stretch the closer they came to the doors.
“I do not expect Mr. Wickham to appear this evening,” Elizabeth said, flatly. Like an apparition, their reflections greeted them in the Venetian windows as the east side of the house remained dark. From outside they could judge that only the rooms leading to the western wing were lit, culminating in a domed octagon.
“You do not suppose his rift with Mr. Darcy kept him away?” Jane asked. She knew her sister believed Mr. Wickham’s tales of woe as Elizabeth had listened to them first hand. Jane, however, liked to find the good in everyone and so she suspected the truth likely lie somewhere in the middle between Mr. Bingley’s exaltations of his closest friend and Mr. Wickham’s accusations.
Elizabeth shrugged as she and Jane took a few more steps outside of the ancient home and could now view the lighted hall before them.
Chapter 5 - If Mr. Darcy Dared (cont'd)
“That I cannot say. Uncle Phillips maintains that many in the village have grown suspicious of a few of the soldiers and outstanding charges they have run up. I believe Mr. Wickham is suspected to be one of the troublesome customers.” Elizabeth’s mind raced with her newly acquired intelligence about the lieutenant who had flattered her so effortlessly at her aunt’s last card game. The difficulty of learning any man’s true character was lately becoming an enigma. The more she thought about either man, Mr. Darcy or Mr. Wickham, the greater her frustrations grew and so she resolved herself to not thinking about either of them as much as she could manage. Unfortunately, the two eldest Bennet sisters had reached the moment of exchanging greetings with Mr. and Miss Bingley so further discussion of the attendees would have to wait until after the dancing.
“Miss Bennet, Miss Elizabeth, may I say that you are both looking fine this evening! Why I’ve never seen so many pretty ladies as those who have graced us with their presence tonight!” Mr. Bingley excitedly shook both of the ladies’ hands as though he had not felt the slightest fatigue in greeting so many strangers into his home before reaching the Bennets.
“Forgive my brother, he makes it sound as though we never attend any function of significance in Town but I assure you, our calendars are quite full when we are there.” Miss Bingley, placed a damper on the kind compliments of their host that Jane ignored and responded with a compliment on Miss Bingley’s hair.
Elizabeth only managed a weak smile as she kept her opinion on Miss Bingley’s rudeness to herself. She followed Jane into the grand ballroom to the right.
Both Bennet sisters could not help but marvel at the room filled with autumn wreaths and bunting in shades of goldenrod and rust, glistening in the candlelight. One side of the room boasted a line of tables with more than just the usual refreshments to be found at a local assembly, but platters of cold meats and cheeses with a variety of baked breads already feeding the local residents who arrived before the Bennets. Musicians hired from London began to take their places as Jane and Elizabeth looked to each other for confirmation they were indeed partaking in this very exciting night and it was not all merely a fairytale.
As more people began to rush by them to fill the ballroom, Elizabeth leaned over to Jane and she squeezed her sister’s hand. “Perhaps the next time Mr. Bingley hosts a ball it will either be in the honor of your engagement or you as hostess,” she said with discretion so none near may hear them.
Jane giggled as just then she locked eyes with Mr. Bingley entering the ballroom.
“Whatever would make him happiest I would surely wish to provide,” Jane whispered to her sister. As Jane left her to join Mr. Bingley for the first set, a gentleman’s throat clearing behind her caused Elizabeth to whirl around to stare directly into the chest Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy. Before she could talk, the gentleman collected her hand and bowed to kiss the top of it.
“I believe, Miss Elizabeth, that we are to dance the first set?”
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If Mr. Darcy Dared
a Pride and Prejudice variation novel
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As Charles Bingley and Fitzwilliam Darcy prepare for the Netherfield Ball, a gentlemen’s challenge develops between them to secure their future happiness . . . with the two eldest Bennet sisters! But when things do not go as expected for Mr. Darcy, Hertfordshire society is in an uproar over the pursuit of one of their favorite daughters by such a wealthy gentleman.
Despite being claimed by Mr. Darcy as his future bride, Elizabeth Bennet has no plans to wed the proud and disdainful Mr. Darcy, no matter what her father says! At her sister’s urging, she agrees to give him a chance, if only for Jane’s sake. But there are others with an interest in breaking a match between Fitzwilliam Darcy and some country miss. . .
The stakes are high and romance strong as two of Jane Austen’s most beloved characters dare to declare their feelings, dare to defy family, and dare to trust each other!
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Good morning!
Great story!
You likely already got this note, but if not – it looks like you intended to move the discussion of Darcy and Wickham, and ended up duplicating it.
Thanks for giving us a sneak peek at this WIP!
THANKS for that catch! Yeah, the system for the front end of these posts is a bit clunky sometimes. But I try to make it easy to read whether you have a computer, phone, or tablet. THANKS!
Thanks for your excerpts and your great writing Looking forward to reading the rest
Happy to hear your grandfather recovered and wish you the very best tor the NEW Year
Your writing is helping to distract me in the grieving process am experiencing for a dear friend’s sudden demise
Well I am glad Elizabeth is hearing that there are two sides to every story. Let the first dance begin.