I am going to be mad posting today For The Love of a Bennet on my site and fanfiction.net so that I can get started posting Book 6 of Moralities of Marriage. I hope to eventually record the chapters of For the Love of a Bennet this winter and post them. After Moralities of Marriage 6, we will be taking a break from preorders. 🙂 I will be going back to posting and publishing. This means Netherfield Girls will likely also publish long before next summer. Thank you for understanding, having to move my office back home threw everything off.Â
-Elizabeth Ann West
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Chapter 8 - For the Love of a Bennet a Pride and Prejudice Variation
Elizabeth Bennet cringed at the musty, humid smell filling the air. The regiment had camped down the previous evening in a swampy place the soldiers called Muddleswood. When the caravan stopped so close to Brighton, even Elizabeth felt confused as Lydia loudly complained about another camp night, instead of resting in a town with an inn.Â
Mrs. Forster explained they would stop outside the ancient village of Hassock the night before so that they did not arrive in the dark at the barracks. While Elizabeth understood the logistics of the army were paramount, her younger sister found it difficult to recall her pleasure was not the priority of the trip.
“Lydia,” Elizabeth called her sister’s name to the sleeping form in the folding camp bed across from her. But there was no response.
“Lydia!” Elizabeth flung her small pillow over at her sister’s head where it bounced off, catching the pins of rolled hair curled tightly to her scalp.
“Mmm, no,” Lydia groaned, and Elizabeth released an exasperated sigh.
“Yes, we have to get up. I hear people outside,” she explained. Giving up on her sister, Elizabeth rose and saw to her meager toilette. She donned the last sensible gown from her trunk for the day’s travels.
Pulling her shawl around her shoulders as she stepped out of the tent, dressed for the day, Elizabeth watched with fascination as many men and women in the caravan readied wagons and horses all around her. The morning’s mist made the whole operation eerie, and she shivered with a chill looking up at the cloudy sky stubbornly hiding the sun. Thus far, the adventure to the shore had scarcely shared any sunshine.
The proper army and shadow army, as she had come to call in her mind the various men and women who traveled seamlessly with the soldiers, created a noisy orchestra of chaos. Elizabeth understood many wives traveled even abroad with their husbands, stopping only a town or two away from battlefields. She had read such accounts when she studied wars with her father in his library. Soldiers died, but wives who witnessed the bloodshed were the only tales benefitting a losing side.
With such a ruckus caused by troop movement, it suddenly made more sense how grand armies marched within mere miles of each other, knowing well the other’s location. And yet, they would wait for dawn and meet on a battlefield in the middle, rarely using the element of surprise to turn the tide. She had not been much older than Lydia when she and Mr. Bennet read the accounts of England’s greatest battles. Her father attempted to explain the military’s shared sense of honor. Seeing with her own eyes the immediate community and kinship knitted together in a caravan of traveling regiments, a small inkling of the concept her father had tried to teach her so long ago took hold. Camp was home. Only the most dastardly villains stooped to ransacking someone’s home like a thief in the night!
For the Love of a Bennet
What if Elizabeth Bennet traveled with Lydia to Brighton?
A reimagining of Jane Austen’s most beloved tale, Pride & Prejudice, join author Elizabeth Ann West as she writes the romantic adventure story she always wanted! When Lizzy and Lydia arrive in Brighton, it’s very clear that the younger Bennet sister came with very serious plans towards Mr. Wickham. Thankfully, an old ally is also in town, with problems of his own to solve. After Mr. Darcy, himself, is summoned to Brighton to hopefully solve two dilemmas with one wealthy member of the gentry, the whole militia is thrown into an uproar by Wickham’s most dastardly deed, yet. Together, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy have to save Lydia from her own undoing, or it will mean more than just mere reputations are ruined.
For the Love of a Bennet is a novel length story, currently being posted chapter by chapter on Elizabeth’s author site. This story was originally conceptualized in 2019 as a part of the All Go to Brighton challenge.
Chapter 8 - For the Love of a Bennet, a Pride and Prejudice Variation
“Lizzy—” Lydia moaned sleepily, as she stumbled out of the tent the two sisters had shared next to the Forsters. The Colonel had long left his camp bed to order the troop movements and oversee breaking camp. Mrs. Forster had left shortly after to see to the needs and assignments for the other officer wives traveling with them. “La! Everyone is always so busy!” Lydia remarked as she stretched and looked around her.
Elizabeth clucked her tongue and tucked her shawl securely under her arms as she reached up to button the last fastening on the back of Lydia’s gown that she had missed.
“Would you fetch your Spencer? You are not decent to be out,” Elizabeth scolded, as her sister was not in her dressing gown, thankfully. But her choice of a white frock for the day made her décolletage look improper in the meager dawnlight.
“You don’t have a Spencer,” she countered.
Elizabeth lifted her shawl to reveal a plain earth brown frock made of solid calico. “Then put on your walking gown and put the silk away. Honestly, Lydia, we still have the dust of the road to contend with, at least five more miles! Do you wish to ruin such a lovely gown?”
“But I wanted to arrive looking my best!” she whined. Elizabeth pointed her finger at the tent and left her sister no option but to re-enter. Lydia stalked off with a low grumble.
“Yoohoo!” Mrs. Forster said, returning with her friend, Mrs. Warrender, the wife of Lieutenant-Colonel Warrender, commander of a regiment that had ridden out to meet Forster’s battalion. To Elizabeth’s dread, two lieutenants in Colonel Forster’s regiment accompanied them: Mr. Wickham and Mr. Denny.
“Miss Bennet, has Miss Lydia awakened?” Mrs. Forster asked, brightly, and Elizabeth nodded.
“Yes, and our trunks are packed. We are ready to depart. I am eager to reach our lodgings at the Preston Barracks,” Elizabeth explained, and Mrs. Warrender shook her head with a chuckle.Â
“Right-o, fetch the trunks, gentlemen, if you would,” the woman ordered and Elizabeth stepped directly in their way.
“A moment, if you please, my sister is still readying herself in our tent,” Elizabeth explained, disliking the smirks both officers couldn’t hide at such intelligence.
“Silly me, I forgot there are two of you! And you shall not stay in the barracks, my dear. I couldn’t possibly allow those dreadful arrangements to stand when I heard Mrs. Forster was bringing her friend from Hertfordshire! The old colonel will have to make use of his horse,” the woman paused to share a knowing look with her friend. “But I said for my friend Harriet, only the best! The Forsters must be next to the Warrenders and Lennoxes, right on Kings Road!” Mrs. Warrender said, and Elizabeth slowly nodded to be polite, but she had no idea what this new woman was talking about.
“Forgive me, this is Mrs. Maryann Warrender, who brought her carriage from Brighton just to catch me this morning.” Mrs. Forster made the hasty introduction. “But it is true, she conspired with Penelope and Persephone, and now we are staying at the seaside! It’s such a great honor!”
“Nonsense! The terror is how long you poor dears have been traveling!”
“There’s our luck, Wickham,” Denny teased his friend, earning a curious look from the two married women present.
“Your luck, sir?” Mrs. Warrender asked.
Denny blushed. “Only that Miss Bennet and Miss Lydia were bright spirits at many dinners and dances in Meryton. If they will be as far as the seaside, I fear we shall not see them as often.”
Elizabeth frowned as she held no inclination to see Mr. Wickham at all. If Mr. Denny were part and parcel to the presence of the former, she had not a care to see him, either. But to the two married women, such flirtatious words were a happy circumstance.
Elizabeth watched as Mrs. Warrender reassured both gentlemen that there would be plenty of diversions for their unit on King’s Road after their training as Lydia finally reemerged from the tent.
“There! Are you satisfied now—” she stopped her angry retort short when she noticed the new company. Immediately, she changed her tone to a conciliatory one. “Good morning, Lieutenant Wickham,” she said, batting her eyelashes and giggling. When he tilted his head to his ally, Mrs. Warrender, Lydia turned her attention to the new friend of Mrs. Forster’s. “I’m Miss Lydia Bennet,” she said, dropping to a slight curtsy.
“Mrs. Maryann Warrender, at your service,” the stranger introduced herself to more giggles, this time from Lydia and Mrs. Forster, but returned the head nod.
“Indeed, Mrs. Warrender has seen that we are moved to Kings Road, directly seaside in our lodgings,” Elizabeth explained to her tardy sister, suddenly recalling the map she had studied in her book. “Shall we be close to the Old Steine Gardens?” she asked.
Mrs. Warrender leaned in conspiratorially after dispatching the lieutenants to their duty. “Just two blocks away. And Mrs. Fitzherbert is in residence this summer at Steine House. We shall have so many glorious diversions,” she said, clapping her hands to applaud their small triumph, drowned out as a small group of soldiers in full uniform trampled by in a double-march to meet their brothers in arms. The ground around them was quickly losing its sturdiness as the dew and many feet turned the main through-fare of camp into a sludgy, muddy mess.
“Lydia, perhaps you should put on your boots,” Elizabeth remarked, as Mr. Wickham and Mr. Denny re-emerged from the tent, a trunk each on their backs. “Wouldn’t a private or footman be more appropriate?” Elizabeth asked, suddenly struck by the odd efforts of officers to carry ladies’ trunks.
“And trust a lowly private or footman with Miss Lydia’s personal belongings? You must be more careful, Miss Bennet, an army camp is no place to risk one’s favorite items to hands that would lessen your load with no remorse,” Mr. Wickham explained, to the approval of Mrs. Warrender and Mrs. Forster.
“Come, we shall have your things added to my carriage and be off,” she said to Mrs. Forster. “We can allow the sisters to ride just the two of them in your carriage, and get home in plenty of time to rest and prepare ourselves for this evening.” Mrs. Warrender issued orders like the practiced officer wife she was.
“Why? What is planned for this evening?” Lydia asked, trying to keep up with the conversation, but understanding the development to be a good one. Ignoring her sister was only a mild positive addition. “And who is Mrs. Fitzherbert? I shall be glad to make her acquaintance,” she said, off-handedly.
Mrs. Warrender suddenly stopped in her movement to call over the young private assigned to the Colonel’s family as a sort of footman.
“My dear, one does not make acquaintances with Mrs. Fitzherbert,” Mrs. Warrender started, bewildered that Lydia knew nothing of the current politics of the Crown.
“I shall explain this matter to my sister in the carriage. But you mentioned an engagement for this evening? After all of our travel, we can’t be expected—” Elizabeth was cut off by Mrs. Forster gently placing a hand upon Elizabeth’s arm before her friend Mrs. Warrender could feel further offense.
“Oh, we shall arrive with plenty of time to rest. But it is tradition for a large fete the night a new regiment arrives. There will be a dinner and dancing at the Old Ship Inn in the assembly rooms.” Mrs. Forster received a well-earned nod of respect from Mrs. Warrender. Even though Mrs. Forster’s husband outranked Mrs. Warrender’s husband, the latter held more years as an army officer rank and had taken Mrs. Forster under her tutelage. The two Bennet sisters were ushered to the waiting carriages.
As Elizabeth boarded the carriage she had previously ridden in with Mrs. Forster and Lydia, at the last minute, Lydia pulled a stunt.
“Lizzy, why don’t you ride alone and rest and I shall ride with Mrs. Forster and Mrs. Warrender,” she said, to the amiable responses of the two officer wives.
Elizabeth felt uneasy, as they had not even stepped foot into Brighton proper, and Lydia was already pushing to separate. As though she sensed the protectiveness of an elder sister, Mrs. Forster reached out for Elizabeth’s hand and squeezed it.
“She shall be fine with me. And your carriage will be directly behind us.”
Trusting Mrs. Forster, Elizabeth agreed and felt slightly relieved to ride alone for the last leg of the journey. She could read and rest in peace. Additionally, she would be spared what she imagined would be a very irritating show of antics by her sister to impress the new and interesting Mrs. Warrender.
For the first time since she had agreed to come and protect Lydia, Elizabeth slightly regretted her decision and felt homesick. She also wondered what their sister Jane was doing. She resolved to think about a letter to her elder sister as soon as they arrived in Brighton. From the way Mrs. Warrender took charge, it felt like once they were in Brighton, there would not be a moment’s peace to be had!
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What if Elizabeth Bennet traveled with Lydia to Brighton?
A reimagining of Jane Austen’s most beloved tale, Pride & Prejudice, join author Elizabeth Ann West as she writes the romantic adventure story she always wanted! When Lizzy and Lydia arrive in Brighton, it’s very clear that the younger Bennet sister came with very serious plans towards Mr. Wickham. Thankfully, an old ally is also in town, with problems of his own to solve. After Mr. Darcy, himself, is summoned to Brighton to hopefully solve two dilemmas with one wealthy member of the gentry, the whole militia is thrown into an uproar by Wickham’s most dastardly deed, yet. Together, Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy have to save Lydia from her own undoing, or it will mean more than just mere reputations are ruined.
For the Love of a Bennet is a novel length story, currently being posted chapter by chapter on Elizabeth’s author site. This story was originally conceptualized in 2019 as a part of the All Go to Brighton challenge.
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Excellent chapter! Elizabeth is learning the ways of the military.