Over a year since an update on this story… but it’s been a wild year. I am hoping that posting the chapters I do have written on this story, from last year, can help me get unstuck. – EAW
Chapter 10 - The Heart of Marriage, Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage, a Pride & Prejudice Variation
The Fitzwilliam carriage rolled up the drive to Rosings Park. Inside, Ovi Longwell, the junior solicitor to the Fitzwilliam and Darcy families, wore a grim expression on his face.
“Why so worried, Ovi?” Richard Fitzwilliam asked, as nothing he said managed to lighten the mood of his friend since their last stop in Whyteleafe.
“I don’t believe Mrs. Wickham will appreciate our news. That her son will not inherit the estate.”
Richard Fitzwilliam shrugged. “Buck up, Georgiana is a survivor. I’ve underestimated her before and lived to regret the day. I am confident she planned for the inevitable,” he said.
“Well, we shall see.” Ovi’s lips curled into a weak smile.
The carriage rumbled to a stop, and Richard exited first, greeted by Frederick de Bourgh and his son Julian de Bourgh. The men exchanged introductions after Mr. Longwell and the clerk, John Braddock, joined them in front of the imposing stone home. The whole party from London was invited inside to the grand foyer of the medieval styled county home.
Richard looked around furtively for his cousin, suddenly worried that she was not present. Instantly, he worried about leaving her behind to deal with the de Bourgh heirs on her own.
“I do not see my cousin, is she well?”
“Georgiana?” the elder de Bourgh asked, and Richard nodded. “Her son was fussy after tea and she is upstairs helping the nurse,” he said.
“Nurse?” Richard asked, surprised as there had not been a nurse the last time he visited.
The younger de Bourgh nodded. “We believed it best for her and the child,” he said.
Finding himself shocked by the sound of things, Richard tuned out Mr. Longwell explaining what all of the men already knew: Rosings Park would return to the de Bourgh family.
“As I was saying, the difficult part is that with Sir Lewis de Bourgh predeceasing his wife, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, we have two benefactors. Mr. Frederick de Bourgh is the rightful heir of Rosings Parks and items purchased during the time of Sir Lewis de Bourgh’s lifetime. Mrs. Anne Fitzwilliam is the rightful heir of her mother’s possessions and purchases made after the death of her father.”
Julian de Bourgh groaned, attracting the notice of the others. “So is he here to count the silver?” he sneered, pointing to the young man with a dowdy coat on, standing behind Mr. Longwell.
Ovi Longwell looked behind him to where Julian pointed, and then turned around and stepped aside for Mr. Braddock could speak for himself. Only the younger clerk did not.
“Speak man, this is the job,” Ovi whispered.
John Braddock nervously fumbled for words as he looked over the massive collection of items spread out across the room.
“How-how many rooms is the estate again?” he asked, pulling out paperwork from his leather case.
“Sixty-two, and another ten in the Dowager’s Cottage,” Mr. Longwell said, dryly.
Mr. Braddock appeared to calculate the amount of work in his head. “Yes, yes, if the inventories of the house have been maintained—” he said, interrupted by Richard’s laughter.
“Best write to my cousin Darcy there, de Bourgh. My aunt was terrible at records and he would likely have kept them out of her paws from editing the ledgers,” he said. Then he bowed to allow Braddock and Longwell to make further inroads with the proper heirs. “I am going to see my cousin, if you don’t need me?”
The elder de Bourgh nodded to the former military man and Richard escaped the parlor like the many times he found an excuse to leave and spend time with Anne, before they were married.
With the inventory on his mind, Richard couldn’t help but admire the opulence of his aunt and uncle’s estate. The walls were adorned with expensive looking tapestries. Knowing precisely where the nursery was, he could hear Georgiana speaking with another woman he presumed to be the nurse.
He approached the door to find that it was slightly ajar, and he spied his cousin sitting in a chair opposite the nurse. Richard decided not to interrupt them just yet. Instead, he leaned against the doorframe and listened for a moment.
Georgiana was clearly agitated by something as she anxiously fussed over her son. The nurse, however, tried to soothe Georgiana’s worries with kind words and gentle touches.
“He is just a bit fussier than usual today,” the nurse said reassuringly. “I am sure he will settle down and soon be his normal happy self.”
“But he’s getting more and more fussy each day. Perhaps we should call a doctor?”
“Miss, it is the way with all babies. He’ll be fine now, you should get some rest,” the nurse said, and the young mother sighed.
Richard took that as his cue to knock softly on the door. “Is my nephew causing trouble already?” he asked.
Georgiana looked relieved to see her cousin, a drastic difference from the last time they were together, just a few weeks ago. Richard looked her up and down to notice any defect in her care, any sign of maltreatment by the de Bourghs. But there were none.
“I think he needs a doctor. His cheeks look flushed, and he won’t—” she started, and stopped as the child began to wail once more at an ear-piercing volume.
Richard looked at the nurse who glanced away from the child, with an expression he found odd. “Georgie,” he asked, as he scooped up the child and handed him to his mother. The babe instantly turned his head to root for his mother’s breast. “Do you still have your milk? I believe he is hungry.”
With a look of horror at her cousin, she admitted that yes, she did still have the ability to feed him, but that was the nurse’s job.
“Let me speak to the nurse for a moment in the hall, and meanwhile, try to feed the lad. See if that sates him,” he said, escorting the nurse who now kept her face downcast to the floor.
With the door to the nursery shut, they could still hear little Thomas fussing, but he quickly quieted and Richard assumed his mother found success with her bosom. But his old military habits resurfaced and he felt there was something suspicious going on.
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Chapter 10 - The Heart of Marriage, Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage, a Pride & Prejudice Variation
“Has the babe not been nursing?” he asked in a hushed tone, and the young nurse began to quake with fear.
“When I was hired,” she began, wiping tears from her eyes. “I told them my Maisie be done and I had hardly any left, I told them. But now, sir, now please, I need this position. My Maisie, sir, if I don’t have a position she won’t eat,” the poor, young nurse pleaded.
Richard closed his eyes in frustration. The baby didn’t appear too worse for the wear, and he did not know much about these matters. Still, it was a problem that needed to be solved.
Around the corner, Richard noticed Mrs. Annesley hovering near and he beckoned her over. The quibbling nursemaid began her excuses and Richard cut her off.
“Take her downstairs and find another place for her to work, away from my cousin,” he said, firmly, and Mrs. Annesley nodded, ushering the young woman away.
Fixing an expression of indifference on his face, he knocked once more on the nursery door, and his cousin bade that he enter.
Arrested by the sight of Georgiana rocking her placated son, Richard’s resolve melted. His mouth was parched, and his stomach twisted in knots. How was he supposed to break the news to her?
Too timid to approach mother and child, Richard hung back as Georgiana began to sing a lullaby he recognized as a family favorite. A new thought began to niggle in his mind, and he prayed that his cousin Darcy would understand his meddling.
“You don’t wish to go to London and find a husband, do you?” he asked.
Firmly, Georgiana shook her head. She brushed her son’s cheek as she sang. The baby’s eyes were closed, and he smiled at her caring gestures.
“But what if you didn’t need to go to London to find one?” he suggested.
Georgiana rolled her eyes at him and spoke in the same light voice she had sung in so as not to disturb Thomas. “You and Brother have made it clear you will not release my dowry no matter who I marry.”
“That’s not true,” Richard said, holding up his hands in a gesture of surrender. “Had we released your funds, Wickham would have wasted them. You cannot blame us there.”
“And now what is the excuse?”
“You are a girl of seventeen! You would become the victim of the first fortune hunter to come along!” he exclaimed, and she shushed him for disturbing the baby. “Blast,” he whispered.
Carefully, Georgiana lifted her son and walked with him over to the bassinet. Soon he would be too big for the small bed and would need a proper cot.
“I am not a girl. I am a woman. And I am a mother,” she said back, in a gentle tone to keep her son soothed. After she laid him down, she turned to her cousin. “Another maid needs to be sent up to watch over him, that he may not fall out,” she said.
He nodded and watched as Georgiana poked her head out the door and flagged down the footman standing in the hall. He almost didn’t agree to the request. A change in the staff’s obedience arrived with the de Bourghs, and Georgiana Wickham no longer held the power she once abused. But when he spied the former Colonel behind Mrs. Wickham nodding to the order, the young servant dashed to find a suitable candidate for the assignment before he was placed in charge of the babe.
Alone once more, Richard braved the words he needed to say. “Unless you marry Julian de Bourgh, I do not see a future for you and young Thomas here. The wills are against you and Anne, I’m afraid. And no court will side against men for either of you, even if a third will exists. The trust is too powerful.”
Georgiana spun around and glared at her guardian, scoffing at his tempered suggestion. “Do you think I haven’t realized that long ago? I stalled. But I need to know, if I did marry one of the de Bourgh men, would you and my brother block my dowry again?”
Richard was taken aback by Georgiana’s suggestion that she might marry the elder de Bourgh instead of the younger, but she wouldn’t be the first young lady to match with a man so much her senior.
Dumbstruck by her craftiness, Richard remained silent until Georgiana asked him once more.
“Will you hold back my funds?” she demanded.
He shook his head. “And I don’t believe your brother would, either, not if you were married properly to one of the de Bourghs. Or any other man of good breeding,” he added, so that his cousin understood she would not be forced into a match. “You can still come to London, Dearest,” he began, but she shook her head as the maid arrived.
“I won’t feed the gossip mills of those harpies,” she stated, and abandoned her cousin and the maid to her suite down the hall. If she was to secure one of the de Bourgh men, especially before Mrs. Annesley put her claws into Uncle Frederick, she had to make sure she looked her best at dinner.
Entirely unsure of who the grown woman he encountered was in the nursery instead of the petulant, spoiled cousin he expected, Richard shook his head and returned downstairs. He would make sure a proper nurse was installed at Rosings Park before he left for London. And he would feel out both the junior and senior de Bourgh men about their intentions towards Georgiana. She might be a widow and mother, but he still felt responsible for her well-being.
You’ve been reading The Heart of Marriage.
Coming soon to stores.
Book 6 of the Moralities of Marriage Series.
The final book of the Moralities of Marriage Series sees Mr. and Mrs. Darcy fighting off scandal and family strife once and for all. Mr. Darcy is summoned to London to provide answers for Mr. Wickham’s crimes. Too many of High Society were hoodwinked by the mining scheme, and outside forces would relish plundering the Darcy coffers to compensate for their losses.
At Pemberley, Elizabeth is set on establishing herself as Mistress of the House, no matter what her mother believes. As the house goes into mourning for Mr. Darcy’s aunt, her sisters are despondent that the yuletide ball is cancelled. Especially when none of them knew the woman! The Bingleys try to distract the younger sisters by enlisting their aid in finding a home of their own.
The old scores of his parents’ generation keep Darcy in London longer than he planned. Not even his cousin is immune to the costs of past treacheries. Despite the machinations of Marlborough and Derby, Fitzwilliam is desperate to get home and see the birth of his first child.
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So glad that you have resumed the story! I pray that your life is headed in the direction of your desires.
Good for you! You can do anything and your Readers have faith in you. After all, you are an Elizabeth!
Thanks for the update!!!
I’ve just read this entire series in the last week – what an amazing story you’re writing! I really hope you continue this and we see what happens to the fascinating characters you’ve fashioned.